Hey guys! I just want to post an anim ive been wrokin on... Tell me what you guys think, Should I continue it?

I was making one of my RHG demo's...

Story:
Yellow stick tried to shoot the dragon with big lighting blast...
Before he could do it, the dragon obsorbs the yellow's power and blasts it back at him!
After that he flies away...

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yes this is indeed pivot... pivot 4 that is

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Hey guys! I just want to post an anim ive been wrokin on... Tell me what you guys think, Should I continue it?

I like how it is turning out so I say yes.

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Make your own thread or a new intermediate thread.
This is insulting to beginners and people with extreme rust.



Urgently need C'n'C, coz this guy loves metal.

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Make your own thread or a new intermediate thread.
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Urgently need C'n'C, coz this guy loves metal.

Javelin! long time no see!

well i like how he moves his legs. the front leg should have been eased more so that it wasn't popping out like that. also a bit shaky.
I would recommend placing his back farther forward too, instead of having it curve unnaturally like that. The head bob is just messy, it shouldn't move like that.
the arms are choppy and they should have been more eased. when the arm in front moved forward it should have went higher and should have bent more upward.
all in all its pretty good, just work on easing, flow, and movement.

CnC anyone?

1. Wallan's banned.

2. Welcome back Javelin!
I think his head bent too far, but all is good. :D

3. Some mutation inspired by Stickly.

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1. Wallan's banned.

2. Welcome back Javelin!
I think his head bent too far, but all is good. :D

3. Some mutation inspired by Stickly.

You've gotten so damn good since I left.
Also, the satellite doesn't get propelled back by that amazing force?

Lots of effort on this one. I need help with effects, which I didnt include in this.

I see total improvement compared to your first animations. You should try Styke, it is 200% easier than Pivot and you have Colorz. COLORZ ! OMG ! ^^
I mean, a whole bunch of colorz. And I could help you and give tips ;)

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Lots of effort on this one. I need help with effects, which I didnt include in this.

Maybe it might be better to do a run loop, or even walk loop.

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Lots of effort on this one. I need help with effects, which I didnt include in this.

Very nice overall!
if your looking to put effects into this animation, put some blood in it... -thats always fun!

I like the shape of the sword!!!

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Maybe it might be better to do a run loop, or even walk loop.

Okay. Well, I'm even struggling with walking AND running. Anyway, practice makes perfect.

@Lian, its Mark's old stuff. He gave it to me.

@Ikarhan, I'm too comfortable with Pivot now, but I'm gonna try Stykz as you suggested.