ok, p-rez, you actually have a little bit of talent. However, your animations are jumpy, you need to ease your sticks more . Easing is the speed up & slow down of objects and your stick figures movements. Also, your particles need more frames and should always be drawn with the same pen size. (Unless you can actually pull it off.)
King smash, your walk test needs work. The front arm should bend as well and he resizes as he moves. My advice is try using a 2 pixel line when your satrting out, it'll make it easier to learn the basics. Also, try to animate him moving across the screen, that'll makethe walk seem more fluid. (And while your at it, get rid oif that blank frame at the end.)
Beginners, post your Easytoon animations here.
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Aug 27, 2009 10:06 PM #479686
Aug 27, 2009 11:33 PM #479718
oh thats what that blink was and how do i get a 2 pixel line
Aug 28, 2009 1:33 AM #479750
You mean you honestly haven't figured that out?
Aug 28, 2009 9:21 AM #479862
Quote from kingsmashpretty good for your first
edit:here is a walk test of mine
That looks like a run, not walk.
Aug 28, 2009 3:36 PM #479917
Quote from AvianThat looks like a run, not walk.
That looks like a fucking piece of dripping shit to me.
lulz i trollz u mr kingsmashzors
Aug 28, 2009 4:44 PM #479935
Quote from the darkest whiteok, p-rez, you actually have a little bit of talent. However, your animations are jumpy, you need to ease your sticks more . Easing is the speed up & slow down of objects and your stick figures movements. Also, your particles need more frames and should always be drawn with the same pen size. (Unless you can actually pull it off.)
King smash, your walk test needs work. The front arm should bend as well and he resizes as he moves. My advice is try using a 2 pixel line when your satrting out, it'll make it easier to learn the basics. Also, try to animate him moving across the screen, that'll makethe walk seem more fluid. (And while your at it, get rid oif that blank frame at the end.)
Ok i'll work on the easing and particles, thanks for your critism:Smile:
Aug 29, 2009 2:47 PM #480367
Here's another anim I've been working on for a bit:
C&C? Have I improved from my other animation? Thanks. :3
C&C? Have I improved from my other animation? Thanks. :3
Aug 29, 2009 9:19 PM #480562
Thats really good! You can leae begginers if you keep that up. . . . but, The whole going into the ground, and ground spike thing . . . I was making an anim with those in it! You stole my idea!!!
Aug 29, 2009 10:05 PM #480589
heres a kick test, i know its wobbly though
Aug 29, 2009 11:23 PM #480647
Quote from the darkest whiteThats really good! You can leae begginers if you keep that up. . . . but, The whole going into the ground, and ground spike thing . . . I was making an anim with those in it! You stole my idea!!!
Lol, really? I don't think I've seen that animation of yours...Thanks for the compliment! :]
Aug 30, 2009 1:51 AM #480711
Quote from pheonixslayer21heres a kick test, i know its wobbly though
arms are stiff,there is resizing, and i think the kick is ok realism wise i think lol
Aug 30, 2009 6:33 AM #480797
Quote from kingsmasharms are stiff,there is resizing, and i think the kick is ok realism wise i think lol
Naw.
The kick needs waaaay more force and the stick is wobbly.
Aug 30, 2009 11:16 AM #480859
Quote from pheonixslayer21heres a kick test, i know its wobbly though
You can get rid of the wobblyness by zooming in more.
Aug 30, 2009 12:17 PM #480899
Quote from ojom52Here's another anim I've been working on for a bit:
C&C? Have I improved from my other animation? Thanks. :3
No more comments? 3:
Aug 30, 2009 1:20 PM #480919
Quote from ojom52No more comments? 3:
The Darkest White said all there was to say :)