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Beginners, post your Easytoon animations here.

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Jan 11, 2010 1:26 AM #535295
Full Body Test 3
This is so epic :3
Well for me it is :3
C&C NOW!!!!
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Here it is but the ex last longer
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Jan 11, 2010 6:11 AM #535389
your particles still arn't good. Look, you have to work on some particle tests more.
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Jan 11, 2010 11:44 AM #535467
I agree with FS, try using the 1 pix brush for all particles and effects, it looks better. And though there are times when physics looks good when applied to particles (fire, explosions etc), for dash and attack trails one generally doesn't add physics.
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Jan 11, 2010 5:10 PM #535532
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First fullbody...yada yada yada...

i know it sucks...

CnC
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Jan 11, 2010 11:18 PM #535620
Its alright for the beginner thread, man. don't be so hard on yourself.
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Jan 12, 2010 12:12 AM #535632
Hey its better than my first fullbody test.
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Jan 12, 2010 12:30 PM #535791
I tried to change mah particles like you guys suggested......

Right Befo Skoo :3
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Eased Combo
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Jan 12, 2010 12:45 PM #535798
still no good. Look at how i did the explosion in my tutorial
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Jan 12, 2010 12:50 PM #535799
O.k
But first give me some c&c on my combo I tried to ease it
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Jan 12, 2010 12:57 PM #535802
Im really quite tired of critisizing. Im beginning to become lazy.

Ill try

Resizing is a very big issue through your full bodys...
I didn't really see much easing. Only easing I saw to an extent was the punch.

that was my C&C... Sorry if it isn't satisfactory =S
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Jan 12, 2010 1:29 PM #535804
Quote from zer0gravity


Resizing is a very big issue through your full bodys...
I didn't really see much easing. Only easing I saw to an extent was the punch.


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Jan 12, 2010 4:50 PM #535833
2 new anims.......

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I want CnC on both(fullbody)

This is my gunner charachter in mhfu
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And my newer one.
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Good or not?
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Jan 12, 2010 7:38 PM #535910
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I tried to change mah particles like you guys suggested......

Right Befo Skoo :3
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Eased Combo
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Explosions should be more than an inflating circle with a shock wave, my advice is study real and anime explosions and how they are shaped.

Yes the combo had easing but was still lacking smoothness. Also that shockwave was far to big and probably shouldn't have been put there.

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2 new anims.......

Image(actually very old)

I want CnC on both(fullbody)

This is my gunner charachter in mhfu
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And my newer one.
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Good or not?


Your particles are too scribbly, put more effort into them. Also, sticks need heads. And does fix the way his leg bends before it goes off screen, knees shouldn't go that way -.-

(PS tbh, you monster hunter pic really shouldn't be in here, It's an easytoon thread, not a video game thread.)
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Jan 12, 2010 8:05 PM #535921
Woops-a-daisy......wrong forums lol
that was supposed to be on minegarde

Heres the one i wanted u to cc
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Jan 13, 2010 12:19 AM #536032
Needs a little more easing on the punch.But still pretty good!
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