It won't work for me!

Never mind... Tell me if this works!



It is my first one!

some1 comment on mahn...its on p.390 on the bottom

Heres my first easytoon
I know I suck but C&C thanks!

A bit shakey.

just keep practising

Yea I know it's so wobbly =(

well.... I cant really be bothered C&Cing. Ill try

To get started there is alot, I mean ALOT of resizing. You know. to fix shakiness you could use the line tool. just make sure your anims don't come out to stiff

His punch looks like he is slinging his arm over and sorta bear clawing. try to animate it so that he pulls his arm back there's anticipation then a quick foward movement of his arm and folow it through with a step(to give it flow)

His kick kinda looked like his leg was windmilling if you know what i mean. Kicking goes the same for punching. If your having trouble getting your kicks to look realistic.

The start of his energy blast thing was ok but try to ease it a bit more. By this i mean, start off slow and then go faster each frame the slow down again.

I might cc more later... lool. right now im tired

Ok so if you saw in the last page the mouth blast DBL4 did it inspired me to try one too(second animation)
I think his is better though.

wow. this is alot better then your last attempt. still a bit shaky

Thanks I think I'm probably stick with that type of style it seems better.

mmmmk .

Crappy animation... not my best work.

lol.... you didn't take my advice =\

Let me read it again =\