His leg slides back when hes starting the punch. then when hes in the punch it slides back again.
you got the anticipation of the punch fine but you hav't got the arm position right.
If you have ever tried to punch then you know that you don't do it over arm.
Beginners, post your Easytoon animations here.
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Jan 2, 2010 2:16 PM #532045
Jan 2, 2010 10:06 PM #532169

The bit when he grabs the circle to the point where it says 4 minutes l8er
is a little.. um.. BAD! but the rest is good
Jan 2, 2010 10:18 PM #532174

Here is an improved version...
Jan 3, 2010 12:35 AM #532211
I just got my tablet, so I am not used to how it works. I know the animation needs a lot of work, but I thought I'd let you guys critique it.
my first walk in easytoons:

my first walk in easytoons:

Jan 3, 2010 3:15 AM #532269
Not sure if this belongs here or in its own thread, I'm just going to play it safe...


Jan 3, 2010 4:07 AM #532289
yer it does
you need to work on slowing it down and grasp easing befor you start using effects
you need to work on slowing it down and grasp easing befor you start using effects
Jan 3, 2010 4:21 AM #532291
Quote from zer0gravityyer it does
you need to work on slowing it down and grasp easing befor you start using effects
For your own cause, It's heavily spaced on purpose, and yes, there is easing, just trace amounts of it.
Jan 3, 2010 12:41 PM #532414
I was c&cing...... If you can't take critisism then don't post your damn anims.
Jan 3, 2010 10:24 PM #532615
Quote from zer0gravityI was c&cing...... If you can't take critisism then don't post your damn anims.
I can take criticism just fine, at no point did I ever show qualities of not being able to take criticism well.
Jan 3, 2010 10:50 PM #532624
"For your own cause, It's heavily spaced on purpose, and yes, there is easing, just trace amounts of it."
I gave critisism to you and you fought every point. you can't see what the dude is doing in your anim because hes "spaced on purpose". he goes up into the air and stops then comes straight down and then theres a badly done explosion?
Kthnxbai
I gave critisism to you and you fought every point. you can't see what the dude is doing in your anim because hes "spaced on purpose". he goes up into the air and stops then comes straight down and then theres a badly done explosion?
Kthnxbai
Jan 4, 2010 2:38 AM #532701
Can somebody tell me how to keep my animations from constantly resizing
Once I learn that Ill post another animation with the results :D
Also how do I keep the people's head the same size??? I need help :T
And I made an easy toon

lol the end seems lazy
And I made a sword/gun easy toon

The little words in the top left corner say thundaja......just in case some body couldnt read it
C&C please :D
Once I learn that Ill post another animation with the results :D
Also how do I keep the people's head the same size??? I need help :T
And I made an easy toon

lol the end seems lazy
And I made a sword/gun easy toon

The little words in the top left corner say thundaja......just in case some body couldnt read it
C&C please :D
Jan 4, 2010 5:13 AM #532735
Quote from zer0gravity"For your own cause, It's heavily spaced on purpose, and yes, there is easing, just trace amounts of it."
I gave critisism to you and you fought every point. you can't see what the dude is doing in your anim because hes "spaced on purpose". he goes up into the air and stops then comes straight down and then theres a badly done explosion?
Kthnxbai
Do you even know what heavy spacing is? Also, badly done lighting on fire, thank you. And yes, I've never been good at taking criticism, but only from you because you can't even spell 'criticism' right.
Jan 4, 2010 5:45 AM #532751
Ok heres my kick and punch the kick went pretty bad and the punch wasnt really good 
please C&C and tell how to improve.

please C&C and tell how to improve.
Jan 4, 2010 5:48 AM #532755
i cced on it alredy =)
Jan 4, 2010 5:49 AM #532756
this ones different though...