Quote from whitey912

ok theres the proof, now id like some C&C on my work please

Ok, my apologies for earlier.

All I can really cc is the start. The rest is artistic and has crazy particle effects and they all look good to me - I really just do stick movements. Basically I think it should be slowed down a bit and have slightly smaller spacing. I also think some arms would be good before the jump, and slightly longer legs would help make the anticipation on the jump look better. You should probably bend the back at that stage too. And I think it would look better with easing on the background at the start and on all the stick movements. It's better than anything I could do though.

Whitey912: For the first animation when the stick figure jumps he puts too little force with his body, bends his legs and his back a bit more. Effects need some work too, don't go crazy with scribbles. Work on your simple movement like walking and running. For the second animation your effects are fine, and the guy getting attack moved decently. But the attack was done lazily, he really wasn't moving to much; until at the very end.

Tosh: Make sure you move the back a little, when you are kicking you are moving you back to help with your balance. Mostly a little backwards, then forward afterward. His arms were a little short to, and were not moved to much when he was kicking as well.

Can I get something on this:

Quote from Zed

Eh, might as well post this:



First time ever using easytoon. Basically I just opened it up to practise my particles and redrawing. Couldn't be bothered to do anything with the stickman in the end; especially after I decided that non-100%-black stickmen look shit.

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Can I get something on this:



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No.
No you can't.



lol.
I cant CnC

Yeah sure
Zed: The animation was mainly done without too much error that is easily seeable. But the ball seems to be on the ground a tab long, and the ball was in the air with little movement for too long. And yeah if the stick figures aren't 100% black, they look a bit awkward. I did like the effects.

Ah, well. Who uses easytoon anymore these days. :p

This is my VERY first animation with EZtoon, VERY FIRST ^^

Note: i made it so when the lightning circles it just runs in that circle
Note2: the things around him is supposed to be fire, remember its meh first time :P

here's another i just wanted to know
did you mean it like this zed?




I mean as in moving back a little before the kick....
just ignore the wacky arm...

Quote from tosh

here's another i just wanted to know
did you mean it like this zed?




I mean as in moving back a little before the kick....
just ignore the wacky arm...

I didn't realise I'd ever cc'd you. If I mentioned anticipation then yeah, that's what that is.

Nah its my mistake i meant ani...
I was in your thread when i wrote the message
sorry

Edit: any tips on smoke and force??



oh and c&c.

A little jerky at some parts, but other than that pretty fluid

First time i've animated in god knows how long. Tried quick attack style lol.

http://filebox.me/view/ms8dfpq98

Since your samurai competition entry.

Does this mean i'm god?