Its sort of a Test. I might Redo/continue this. Its a bit crappy, But.. i had an idea and.. i drew it. I still think i can make it better.

C&C? maybe...

Looks pretty sweet I would say. Just make it cleaner and less scetchy is the only thing mabye.

Perhaps make the neck of the "ghost" smokier/foggier. It's quite plain.
Add some fog around the person and make the lines more distinctive to give it a srot of "Fading" look.
It'd also give a foggier look, because to me it looks like a smokey aura forming a demon/ghost.

It might work, maybe.. possibly.

Anyway, i like it. Kind of reminds me of something though.. can't quite think of what.

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to me it looks like a smokey aura forming a demon/ghost.

Thats kinda what i was thinking of when i was drawing it. But yeh, i need to fix it up a bit. It was kinda a rough draft. Thanks for the tips, they help.

This drawing reminds me of the wallbuster animation, the part where he summons the thing...and it shoots a beam..BLAAHRg

I'd say it's pretty good. Can't wait to see the final draft. And tell your brother to stop using your account.

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This drawing reminds me of the wallbuster animation, the part where he summons the thing...and it shoots a beam..BLAAHRg

I'd say it's pretty good. Can't wait to see the final draft. And tell your brother to stop using your account.

Thanks for the comments. Ill probably redraw it tomorow and add better effects and detail.

P.S. I made him an account, so hell stop. lol