Meh, very long story behind it, don't care to share it with anyone.
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Nov 9, 2008 8:08 AM #290543
Nov 9, 2008 8:11 AM #290546
Needs more frames, more anticipation, more consistency with the face and body shape, and more lifelike features such as pupils.
Nov 9, 2008 8:14 AM #290549
Maybe I did all of those things on purpose?
The face shape stays consistent...
I think your avatar should have a face, and I think that it should include more lifelike features like a face, but of course you probably meant it to be that way.
The face shape stays consistent...
I think your avatar should have a face, and I think that it should include more lifelike features like a face, but of course you probably meant it to be that way.
Nov 9, 2008 8:34 AM #290565
On purpose? Why would you do that :/?
The face doesn't stay constant. Look at it comparatively when the fist is at the very bottom and the very top. And by face I meant head.
The face doesn't stay constant. Look at it comparatively when the fist is at the very bottom and the very top. And by face I meant head.
Nov 9, 2008 8:40 AM #290569
His mouth is open at one point, and clenched at another.
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Nov 9, 2008 8:45 AM #290572
neat hehe, i want to learn to make my easytoon teleport sorta thing, like you had.
Nov 9, 2008 8:46 AM #290576
If you couldn't tell, I'm joking btw.
@Lady Z do you mean in my sig? Heh, it was something I figured out last summer and kind of added it to my style.
@Lady Z do you mean in my sig? Heh, it was something I figured out last summer and kind of added it to my style.
Nov 9, 2008 6:49 PM #290864
well the animation itself is just "okay"
its nothing great. plus theres alot of problems such as:
the right arm is up on his chest like hes retarded or sumthin, and theres no sleve on it.
his face goes from smiling to frowning at the end, and hes not even looking at who hes hitting.
the chin goes from round to ponty
and he has no pupils.
BUT: i do like the blood partcles coming up from the bottom at the end.
i like the fact that decided to put an ear on his face
his nose shape was consistent, the fist was well draw, and it was smooth.
just keep working at it, and i know im a little bit picky, but hey, a lot of ppl are.
so keep going and good luck!
its nothing great. plus theres alot of problems such as:
the right arm is up on his chest like hes retarded or sumthin, and theres no sleve on it.
his face goes from smiling to frowning at the end, and hes not even looking at who hes hitting.
the chin goes from round to ponty
and he has no pupils.
BUT: i do like the blood partcles coming up from the bottom at the end.
i like the fact that decided to put an ear on his face
his nose shape was consistent, the fist was well draw, and it was smooth.
just keep working at it, and i know im a little bit picky, but hey, a lot of ppl are.
so keep going and good luck!
Nov 9, 2008 7:54 PM #290919
Is he punching a back of potatoes? :3
Nov 9, 2008 8:24 PM #290942
Quote from ace...well the animation itself is just "okay"
its nothing great. plus theres alot of problems such as:
the right arm is up on his chest like hes retarded or sumthin, and theres no sleve on it.
his face goes from smiling to frowning at the end, and hes not even looking at who hes hitting.
the chin goes from round to ponty
and he has no pupils.
BUT: i do like the blood partcles coming up from the bottom at the end.
i like the fact that decided to put an ear on his face
his nose shape was consistent, the fist was well draw, and it was smooth.
just keep working at it, and i know im a little bit picky, but hey, a lot of ppl are.
so keep going and good luck!
As for the chin thing, his mouth is open when he's looking down and closed when he's looking away, and he's also clenching his mouth. The reason he's looking away because he's a badass mother****er. He's beating the person or whatever to the point that he doesn't even want to look.
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Nov 12, 2008 1:22 AM #292600
i think its great
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Nov 13, 2008 4:29 AM #293265
Quote from BetaAs for the chin thing, his mouth is open when he's looking down and closed when he's looking away, and he's also clenching his mouth. The reason he's looking away because he's a badass mother****er. He's beating the person or whatever to the point that he doesn't even want to look.
every1 seems 2 be dissing ur animation :Ohhhhh:
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Nov 13, 2008 4:54 AM #293272
me again lol just testin 2 see if ma new signature worked
Nov 13, 2008 5:04 AM #293274
well, it didn't work
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Nov 14, 2008 1:33 AM #293749
i like it
its good
its good