Needs more frames, more anticipation, more consistency with the face and body shape, and more lifelike features such as pupils.

Maybe I did all of those things on purpose?
The face shape stays consistent...

I think your avatar should have a face, and I think that it should include more lifelike features like a face, but of course you probably meant it to be that way.

On purpose? Why would you do that :/?

The face doesn't stay constant. Look at it comparatively when the fist is at the very bottom and the very top. And by face I meant head.

His mouth is open at one point, and clenched at another.

neat hehe, i want to learn to make my easytoon teleport sorta thing, like you had.

If you couldn't tell, I'm joking btw.
@Lady Z do you mean in my sig? Heh, it was something I figured out last summer and kind of added it to my style.

well the animation itself is just "okay"
its nothing great. plus theres alot of problems such as:

the right arm is up on his chest like hes retarded or sumthin, and theres no sleve on it.
his face goes from smiling to frowning at the end, and hes not even looking at who hes hitting.

the chin goes from round to ponty
and he has no pupils.

BUT: i do like the blood partcles coming up from the bottom at the end.
i like the fact that decided to put an ear on his face
his nose shape was consistent, the fist was well draw, and it was smooth.

just keep working at it, and i know im a little bit picky, but hey, a lot of ppl are.

so keep going and good luck!

Is he punching a back of potatoes? :3

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well the animation itself is just "okay"
its nothing great. plus theres alot of problems such as:

the right arm is up on his chest like hes retarded or sumthin, and theres no sleve on it.
his face goes from smiling to frowning at the end, and hes not even looking at who hes hitting.

the chin goes from round to ponty
and he has no pupils.

BUT: i do like the blood partcles coming up from the bottom at the end.
i like the fact that decided to put an ear on his face
his nose shape was consistent, the fist was well draw, and it was smooth.

just keep working at it, and i know im a little bit picky, but hey, a lot of ppl are.

so keep going and good luck!

As for the chin thing, his mouth is open when he's looking down and closed when he's looking away, and he's also clenching his mouth. The reason he's looking away because he's a badass mother****er. He's beating the person or whatever to the point that he doesn't even want to look.

i think its great

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As for the chin thing, his mouth is open when he's looking down and closed when he's looking away, and he's also clenching his mouth. The reason he's looking away because he's a badass mother****er. He's beating the person or whatever to the point that he doesn't even want to look.

every1 seems 2 be dissing ur animation :Ohhhhh:

me again lol just testin 2 see if ma new signature worked

well, it didn't work

i like it

its good