aight, thanks to you people for the support, im gona try real hard on it,
heres the last preview, 36 secs long, thanks for the suport people
i decided to call the movie "untained" dunno why, im not creative with titles. lol, suggestions could be helpful
http://flost.shiftlimits.com/view/imcATT96-k0z

flost dont work?, here. http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/429418

inspiration by,
entanglement
shock1-2
phase-10


btw, i is a noob =D

I like it. BUT, there where some things wrong. Like, the movements, they missed easing, and psy most of the times. But like I said it wasn't bad. and it was good you put some effects in it, but most of the effects are really wobby, and shakky, but those weren't so bad either. the length is good, but gets kinda boring. Good that you put effects in it to catch my attention, but I already said what I said about those.

good job tho.

thanks lol, i made the begining boring on purpose, so that it gets more and more intense

its good, but like ssjbryando said, ease it a bit more, and somehits didnt have that much force look and power, just try easing it a bit more, but nice idea, ur like a...mini-terkoiz like thing ( i mean that in a good way ) keep it up, i hope to u see as a great animator.

i saw a lot of it being ripped, but other than that. cool. movements need work along with particles

Oh shi-
I swear thats the same music as the music me and strills are going to use in WOW1...
But nice animation. It was enjoyable.

lol, im not using this song, i just have it up there for the hell of it, and t man, u always say my stuff is rippied off somthing, its my ideaaaaaa with a black and white bg

http://flost.shiftlimits.com/view/imcATT96-k0z LAST TIME, I SWEAR, NO MORE. lol i fount the music i wanted to use, check it out

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lol, im not using this song, i just have it up there for the hell of it, and t man, u always say my stuff is rippied off somthing, its my ideaaaaaa with a black and white bg

no its not.

I saw at least three things ripped from other movies of which i wont go into.

i never said you ripped black and white bg's. those are just generic.

btw: songs doesn't fit

i honestly do not no what ur talking about, if u see anything that looks ripped off, its probally just a coincidence, i made up the square and circle bg, and fighting movements.

btw, do u have a tutorial on how u make ur effects, entanglement was godly =O

Well you seem to have the basic idea on effects, you just need to spend more time making them disapear and break into smaller pieces.

lol, finaly fantasy

The third, first, and second to last time you used particles on the energy needs more separation. By this I mean just cutting it up more into many more particles to fade away

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lol, finaly fantasy

OH YEAH!!! "Those Who Fight"

I coulda sworn it sounded like Star Fox: Assault

=/