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how am i emproving?

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Death Angel

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Mar 13, 2008 7:59 PM #91634
This is my anim and i hope im enproving...

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Death Angel

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Mar 13, 2008 8:01 PM #91636
Btw i dont think the head falling was realistick enouth:(

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Mar 13, 2008 8:22 PM #91642
everything wasnt realistice enough, u dont got no physics in it, physics is, how far ur neas bend down before u jump, or how far ur arm goes back before u punch, so yea, pretty bad, sorry =/
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Mar 13, 2008 8:35 PM #91650
leo, please spell properly. I don't care how good you can animate, I can't take anyone seriously if they use "u".

NOW THEN: Don't worry about blood yet, wait for a bit, I liked the jump, but the actual death could have used some work.

And about that blood thing I said- If you really want to do blood, ignore me. Kay?
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Mar 14, 2008 12:57 AM #91794
umm, i dont think the part where his head gets cut off looks realistic. the head and body fall REALLY fast like 1 second after his head gets chopped off. look at it closer.
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Mar 14, 2008 1:02 AM #91797
Quote from invertin
leo, please spell properly. I don't care how good you can animate, I can't take anyone seriously if they use "u".

NOW THEN: Don't worry about blood yet, wait for a bit, I liked the jump, but the actual death could have used some work.

And about that blood thing I said- If you really want to do blood, ignore me. Kay?



what is this? colledge?, its the freaking internet, i dont feel like typing a 3 letter word when i can just type 1,
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Mar 14, 2008 1:19 AM #91803
it was ok but u need a little work on jumping and landing and like wat everyone else said work on physics
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Mar 14, 2008 2:51 AM #91835
Quote from leo4life
what is this? colledge?, its the freaking internet, i dont feel like typing a 3 letter word when i can just type 1,


What so now it's so much work to type in two extra letters? Geez, what a bitch. And no, because it's the internet that doesn't mean you type incoherently like a 6 year old who just found out what a keyboard is. This is a forum, not a text message or an AIM chat, remember? Honestly, is it so much work for you to write out the word "you" instead of removing two letters from it?
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Mar 14, 2008 8:57 AM #91972
Yah...he jumps up into the air and stops and falls down in a straight verticle line
I am still here incase youve been celebrating
I just dont come here often because I dont have any new anim.s
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Mar 15, 2008 1:45 AM #92354
Quote from invertin
leo, please spell properly. I don't care how good you can animate, I can't take anyone seriously if they use "u".

NOW THEN: Don't worry about blood yet, wait for a bit, I liked the jump, but the actual death could have used some work.

And about that blood thing I said- If you really want to do blood, ignore me. Kay?


shut up dude, be thankfull hes atleast hes using proper grammar so you could understans whaadafuxx hes saying.
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Mar 15, 2008 2:22 AM #92377
Well first, you ****ing spelt 'improving' wrong.
And second, the animation is too stiff and the blood is fail.
Death Angel

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Mar 15, 2008 8:11 AM #92546
Here were the probloms i realized to late :blood wasnt so good and the head fell the exacly ofiset direction of wich it was suppost to...and i know i cant spell thats y i put "No spelling lessons for me ^_^" message after my posts now o and about the "u" i think ppl have to tipe what they whant aslong as others understand am

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Mar 15, 2008 5:21 PM #92695
i thought he fell too fast, i tihnk he should just stand there, then his head falls off, blood spurts out then he falls clumsily over. thats how i wouldve done it
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Mar 15, 2008 5:29 PM #92703
Quote from Death Angel
Here were the probloms i realized to late :blood wasnt so good and the head fell the exacly ofiset direction of wich it was suppost to...and i know i cant spell thats y i put "No spelling lessons for me ^_^" message after my posts now o and about the "u" i think ppl have to tipe what they whant aslong as others understand am

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I didn't understand anything you just said.

Is it so hard to type correctly on a ****ing forum?
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Mar 15, 2008 9:20 PM #92794
It doesnt ****ing matter as long as you can under stand it...every type of fourm you dont see people say"HI THIER...oops i mean HI THERE"and have time to correct themselves most people dont have the time..ill admit that somepeople do but ALOT OF THE PLAYERS WANT TO TYPE FAST Because they dont have time...maybe they do and they are lazy but if more and more stand up to this "Spelling lesson" then this thread will rather end up in the trash can ...no body is perfect...

animation:Good but, When he got cut in the head.. it was a 3 second reaction...you want it to be cut right away...and not to make it live..

btw:if you guys still want to talk about it..MAKE A THREAD NOT HERE!
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