I nearly puked at your last picture, you really need to brush up on your poses and anatomy.

In case all you did was click the links, the last one was drawn september 23rd -_-

The guy's foot was ridiculously huge, it also looked side on.
Apart from that it was ok.

I'll add some crit.

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November 23 2008- http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=388841

The background is cartoony yet tries to attract realism with some of the bumps and the look of texture. The tree to the right looks pretty weird.
I like the stance of the character, but the character himself looks odd. His head is too small for his body. It might just be his face making it look that way.
His arm (the one that is bending) has a tiny shoulder. I thought it could be perspective, but the way it is bend would show more and broaden the shoulder. Also, it bends too much.
I'm gonna take a wild guess here, but, the rock and grass covering his feet, did you put them there to avoid drawing it?
If you did, that's a pretty clever thing to do. "If you can't draw it, draw a dog over the top of it."

A bit sloppy, I started with a basic Construction model - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=681105

From there, I finished the steps and added a bit of my own scenery. I also improved in scenery! I can draw trees now!

This looks rather well put together. But, the left leg (my left/drawings right), it bows out too far. Since I can see you did an almost-exact copy of the anatomy shown in the book, I can't say much because it's well formed. The body looks like a females, but has a males torso. if it's female, make it bend in more, like an hourglass. If it isn't, thicken the other limbs.

This is the picture that I was creating - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=403979 (1- The book only showed the steps for the Archer. 2- You guys wish I was this good XD)

K.

September 23 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=551571

Very bad FB. I couldn't even draw hand or feet D: not to mention faces -_-
I'm going to flash my drawing tomorrow =] Add some coloring and professionalism.

That's.. That's quite, uh, horrible. Looking at this, then your archer drawing, you've improved more than a lot.

There are still some things you should work on. Like animating, you make little "tests" and then eventually bond the tests to make a good animation.
With drawing, you practice parts of the body then eventually put all of that into one drawing.
I, personally, have most fun drawing faces and hands. I then just add my own the the human anatomy to create a style I enjoy.

Keep it up, bro.

Haha I have the same comic book thingie as you do, impact university right?

That would be the company that made it =]

Thanks Lake, a lot . . . lol. the left shoulder looks like it needs to be broadened a bit, I agree, its too round and close to the body. The right shoulder has a pauldren (shoulder armor). Your face is literally a little bigger than your hand, so judging by the hands I'd say the face is good. Though that is my opinion.

I have many more things I can draw, and I also bought a book on human anatomy, so it's all good =] Thanks for the crit everyone.

Edit: lol, about the feet. I actually did draw them, but the picture wasn't specific about how to draw them or anything because in the books picture, there were two elves sitting in front of the archer. So I improvised and drew my own (which I did like ^_^). Though in the end, I decided not to keep the feet. I dislike ho I did it, I feel that I need more grass and more rocks around that area to help blend it in. Instead of one rock, and one patch of grass.