ORANGE- a silly poem by me

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Mar 15, 2008 4:02 AM #92436
lol, dude thats a cheat
fiddlie-dorange is better
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Mar 15, 2008 4:17 AM #92440
Go kill yourself. Please.
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Mar 15, 2008 5:23 AM #92475
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ok, i get it, the origin of it really shouldn't matter, but the point is, i didn't know it was a word, and really its not like i spent hours on the poem. i wrote it in like 5 minutes, and i sorta liked it. i know it's not the best poem in the world, but i wrote it, i posted it, and im not gonna change it because i accidentally came up with a real word


Yeah well, you shouldn't make a thread for everything you work on for 5 minutes and sort of like.
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Mar 15, 2008 5:45 PM #92719
true, but i don't. you should see how many drawings and stories and poems that i haf all over my "studio" as i like to call it
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Mar 16, 2008 2:44 AM #93009
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how is this a poem?


How is it not a poem?
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Mar 16, 2008 7:04 AM #93147
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How is it not a poem?


i don't think a poem is any group of phrases that kind of rhyme, in the same way literature isn't a chinese take-out menu or a note you write to your mom.
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Mar 20, 2008 3:58 AM #96073
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i don't think a poem is any group of phrases that kind of rhyme, in the same way literature isn't a chinese take-out menu or a note you write to your mom.

Well a poem is a piece of literature to express meaning, but there are variations in the literary art within it.

Too bad this isn't art. It's a bored teen or pre-teen basically hitting the keyboard for five minutes and making words out of letter patterns that come up.

Don't doubt my logic, sir antny. I frequently use florange in my everyday vocabulary.

I would've come back sooner to this thread if I knew two pages of argument was caused by my link.
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Mar 20, 2008 7:15 AM #96219
That was really stupid.
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Mar 20, 2008 7:40 AM #96237
i think you made a typo,
by silly you ment shitty.
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Mar 20, 2008 2:30 PM #96366
I lol'd.

Both at Paco's post AND the failiure of the poem.
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Mar 29, 2008 8:02 AM #104837
wow u people r so supportive and kind
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Mar 29, 2008 8:57 AM #104861
**** you asshole