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Dec 3, 2008 11:27 PM #306716
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Come one guys, I know some of us don't like lixu, but at least be helpful : \ Being surprised on how bad the animation is compared to the previous is not helpful and can be depressing to the animator.


I Love Lixu though =]

The wow means we both know he can do better.
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Dec 3, 2008 11:48 PM #306722
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I Love Lixu though =]

The wow means we both know he can do better.


I know, but still it sounded a bit .. :P. And he can do better, but not with this style. Although if he was skilled, he would be able to do this style with good easing and stuff, but its harder to do for him. [I know max brush >_> But if I went to line or something , it would still work out, seeing as I would still apply my knowledge of easing etc]]

AND NO PROBLEM FOR COMING UP FOR YOU, AND WRITING THAT LONG POST LIXU.

IMAFIRINGMALAZA
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Dec 3, 2008 11:56 PM #306727
The movements only had a moderate fluidity, and the arms were exceptionally stiff.
Needs more easing in every single movement.
Choppy in many places; I can see the individual frames too clearly.
Every movement needs more force.

You shouldn't really have trouble with easing. You just add more frames and slow every movement down more than usual. It should be second nature by now.

Keep practicing, though.
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Dec 4, 2008 1:11 AM #306761
STICK TO THE THICK OUTLINE STYLE. IT WAS AMAZING !!!!1111one
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Dec 4, 2008 3:21 AM #306833
Seemed to jerky and without rythm. btw out of curiosity what type of table do you have?
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Dec 4, 2008 3:50 AM #306857
The green guy is just horrible.
And there a bit bouncey plus the anticipation is not there.
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Dec 4, 2008 5:18 AM #306916
Animation itself wasn't too bad, was off in a few places, but ok. The movements looked akward, first two hits were acceptable, but the rest felt unatural, nice to see you trying new stuff though, thats the only way to improve. Keep it up. I'd add sfx next time, it can make a bad animation, alot better. (not saying yours was bad) lattter.
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Dec 4, 2008 5:32 AM #306929
Your a dirty little negro. Not bad but yea the easing looks weird....fix it up. It isn't horrible.
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Dec 4, 2008 5:42 AM #306945
LIXU HAS A BONER FOR STRILLSyeah
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Dec 4, 2008 7:08 AM #307016
Decrease the frame rate, work on the rhythm. Green's last fall requires more frames. That slo-mo you tried was rather... frame, stop, frame, stop, you should make it frame, frame, frame, frame, not recycle. The moves were quite good, I liked black's backflip at the end and the jump-kick before it. The first punches and kicks at that speed looked for the green guy like he was bouncing... kind of weird. Overall I liked it, but it's certainly not as good as your previous.
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Dec 4, 2008 8:54 AM #307047
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Lixu don't be discouraged by negative comments... THEY DON'T KNOW YOU!

I just think that because you are really comfortable with the tention-like style with the crazy DBZ gravity, it is a very hard transition to make a realistic looking animation with realistic gravity acceleration.

Like what Tawnik said so nicely, you basically need to work on those things.
Easing is the first thing you should work on since it basically ties directly with realistic gravity and also force.

You already have anticipation / choreography down pretty well so don't worry about that.


Don't be so discouraged by these guys that it'll make you quit this style. Stick with it because it's a real good challenge for you and it'll help strengthen your weaknesses.

Thank you Hyun :)
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I Love Lixu though =]

The wow means we both know he can do better.

Man ur so helpfull, next time I will work on that too!

jokes :P

I know I can.
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I know, but still it sounded a bit .. :P. And he can do better, but not with this style. Although if he was skilled, he would be able to do this style with good easing and stuff, but its harder to do for him. [I know max brush >_> But if I went to line or something , it would still work out, seeing as I would still apply my knowledge of easing etc]]

AND NO PROBLEM FOR COMING UP FOR YOU, AND WRITING THAT LONG POST LIXU.

IMAFIRINGMALAZA

I LOVE YOU TOO BRYAN<3 HOLLANDZZZ

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STICK TO THE THICK OUTLINE STYLE. IT WAS AMAZING !!!!1111one

jus i shud do tat dunt ai?
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Seemed to jerky and without rythm. btw out of curiosity what type of table do you have?

bamboo play
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Animation itself wasn't too bad, was off in a few places, but ok. The movements looked akward, first two hits were acceptable, but the rest felt unatural, nice to see you trying new stuff though, thats the only way to improve. Keep it up. I'd add sfx next time, it can make a bad animation, alot better. (not saying yours was bad) lattter.

thank you brotha from anotha motha :3
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Your a dirty little negro. Not bad but yea the easing looks weird....fix it up. It isn't horrible.

uhm okay, thanks
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LIXU HAS A BONER FOR STRILLSyeah

OK YOU GOT ME OFF GUARD, NOW GO.
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Decrease the frame rate, work on the rhythm. Green's last fall requires more frames. That slo-mo you tried was rather... frame, stop, frame, stop, you should make it frame, frame, frame, frame, not recycle. The moves were quite good, I liked black's backflip at the end and the jump-kick before it. The first punches and kicks at that speed looked for the green guy like he was bouncing... kind of weird. Overall I liked it, but it's certainly not as good as your previous.

Thanks for the great critics.
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Dec 4, 2008 11:26 AM #307095
Eazin doood eaaaaziiin!!!!!good luck next time nigga!
Lolz.
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Dec 4, 2008 11:32 AM #307097
On the other hand, that was pretty good, but some of the movements were too sudden and seemed a little stiff. Nice physics, but it looked like you stretched/skewed the black stick in some parts; it seemed a bit too 'bouncy'.

It was okay though.
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Dec 4, 2008 12:05 PM #307099
Okay, thanks people.
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Dec 4, 2008 4:45 PM #307191
I have no problem with Lixu at all.