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Dec 6, 2008 10:13 AM #308284
My Very first flash art , With a tablet...

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So what do ya think?
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Dec 6, 2008 4:12 PM #308582
Pretty good, just make the eye look more realistic, At the moment it looks like a pill.
Keep up the good work!
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Dec 6, 2008 4:18 PM #308588
i like it. but i use gimp for drawings, and if you want a good eyr heres what eye do. make a circle. draw eye outline. erase where the cricle overlaps.
now here is detail. make a small circle in the middle. use a gradient color dark green to green and make sure its set on radial. dark green comes from the center. then do random spots of green all over, and blur it and smudge out wards from the center but not toom much. then put the pupil, add some shine and blur it all a little bit, abd here is a link to what you should get!
Image this was moar of en eyecolor thing. not shape
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Dec 6, 2008 5:17 PM #308640
Mmh yea , that Looks Nice. Thanks!
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Dec 6, 2008 8:22 PM #308726
That's pretty freakin' sweet. Nice job!
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Dec 6, 2008 9:43 PM #308779
It's pretty horrible. I mean that with a lack of offense. But, everybody has to start somewhere.

This is an eye:
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I usually start with the pupil, then make the actual shape of the eye.Which is easy, the pupil, as seen, is just a black circle. The shape of the eye can vary, but try making it like an oval. Once that's done, with just a draft shaping, you then make it more realistic by emphasising the upper line of the eye. With the pupil in place, then do the iris, which is the larger circle involving colour. TRY TO AVOID GIVING IT AN OUTLINE. I feel an outline makes it less realistic, unless the outline is a darker shade of the colour in the eye. But, to start drawing it, involve the outline. This is just to get the main colour in, where you fill it in. Then remove the line. Use a brighter shade around the pupil to take it outwards. If the eye is blue, involve some green. Not a vibrant green, more like a turquoise. Don't have any vibrant colours.
I won't go into more detail.

The eyelashes need thinning and you need to add more. Give them a bit of a flick.
If you want to add some sort of lighting on the eye, then add a white line to the pupil. I can't really explain right as I can't even think right. If I can find some paper I'll draw a tutorial of sorts, but I don't use colour often.
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Dec 6, 2008 9:47 PM #308783
What lake said.
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Dec 6, 2008 10:02 PM #308794
My mom is good at drawing eyes...

LAWLZ
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Dec 6, 2008 10:02 PM #308795
It's funny how the newcomers love it. It's like they are programmed to reply that everything is "cool"
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Dec 6, 2008 10:04 PM #308798
Bwecause its is...
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Dec 6, 2008 10:30 PM #308814
Thanks Lake I was waiting for that comment that would help me alotz.
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Dec 7, 2008 5:40 AM #309128
It sucks.

Pupils are circle. The iris, which you haven't drawn, surrounds the pupil. Eyes have tear ducts. The eyelashes are too thick, and too short. The eyebrow(?) is far too low.

Look at something before you draw it your drawings will look a lot better. Oh and turn on pressure sensitivity.
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Dec 7, 2008 12:36 PM #309325
http://www.howtodrawmanga.com/howtodraw/tutorials_howtodraw_eyes_koda.html

read and learn :|

Cnc on your eye :
make the eye rounder .
and the pupil larger .
and make the eyelashes thinner ,
and remove the green,
and uhh . oh noes the critiq machine jammed D:

just read the link I gave you . ;)
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Dec 7, 2008 1:16 PM #309334
I think he was aiming for an anime eye...
Anyway, for extra help, use the pressure tool on flash, if ur drawing...It will help a lot when it comes to the eyelashes
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Dec 7, 2008 1:42 PM #309336
But ofcourse you will need a tablet :V

first thing you should do is get the basic elements right, and then apply some good colouring and shading.
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