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Mar 16, 2008 2:36 AM #92998
I have easytooned, some. Since the beginners place was closed down a long time ago, I'll post my first flash here.

http://antiup.net/view.php?id=71215184826lol.swf

Yeah, not all that great, advice needed please.
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Mar 16, 2008 2:38 AM #92999
HAHAHAHA! That sucked so hardcore!! Omg, sooo noob! Hahaha!
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Mar 16, 2008 2:39 AM #93001
Well as you've probably noticed, they slide across the floor. Which is bad, unless intended. There was some resizing and some limbs and joints weren't connected. You got the movements down, you just have to make it smoother.

Good so far for your first.
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Mar 16, 2008 2:40 AM #93003
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HAHAHAHA! That sucked so hardcore!! Omg, sooo noob! Hahaha!


Leave.

SSOutPhase, thanks.
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Mar 16, 2008 2:41 AM #93005
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Leave.

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Hey man, accept criticism.
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Mar 16, 2008 2:44 AM #93008
That's not criticism, that's posting like an asshole. Infractget.
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Mar 16, 2008 2:47 AM #93010
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That's not criticism, that's posting like an asshole. Infractget.


This "is" criticism. I'm saying how bad it is, and it SHOULD (as you all say) make you want to do a lot better.
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Mar 16, 2008 2:52 AM #93013
Doesn't matter if it's criticism. Brian C specifically asked for ADVICE. Post advice or don't post at all.
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Mar 16, 2008 2:58 AM #93017
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Doesn't matter if it's criticism. Brian C specifically asked for ADVICE. Post advice or don't post at all.


http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=81451

Did I ask for some C & C or advice?
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Mar 16, 2008 3:05 AM #93023
I hate to be rude but, MAN that was awful!
Sorry, sorry. It's good for first...
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Mar 16, 2008 3:09 AM #93026
Quote from Spazmodan
HAHAHAHA! That sucked so hardcore!! Omg, sooo noob! Hahaha!


your a noob as well stop acting like a child.

you took those criticism from your other animation by heart. and that was not good, you should have taken it in your mind because i told you, you improve from criticism.. CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, this is a flash thread for us to help each other not to be a ****ing Mc.Asshole.

And remember this..

in criticizing do not use your heart use your mind because if you use your heart, if you hate the person your criticizing, your criticism towards that person is not good just like what you are doing. stop being sensitive you damn prick.

and mature, be a man, do you have a dick? DONT BE A ****ING SENSITIVE FAG SPECIALLY WHEN IT'S ABOUT CRITICISM!
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Mar 16, 2008 3:13 AM #93029
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I hate to be rude but, MAN that was awful!
Sorry, sorry. It's good for first...


Oh so now you're copying Spazmodan because he did it first huh? C'mon now, your post was pointless and why would you say it sucks? You animate no better than him.
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Mar 16, 2008 3:13 AM #93030
I know I'm a noob, I said that myself. I've taken that criticism to mind, i'm working an animation hard right now.
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Mar 16, 2008 3:24 AM #93045
Just Emulate real life in these animations. Start with the fact that you have to keep the foot on the floor that you are stepping with on the SAME PLACE on the floor as you step. Make the stickfigures look the same every frame but move, and smoothen it out.

:3
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Mar 16, 2008 3:34 AM #93058
Not to make anyone mad but i like your sigs better.

but to be nice, keep practicing as hard as you can, practice makes perfect =D.
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