stick figures on CRACK

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Dec 17, 2008 11:37 PM #316408
Only reason I can think of for why the neck is bad, is that the huge bump befor the head is....bumpy?

It's great, but the shade on the spit, looks too excessive, isn't spit see through water?
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Dec 18, 2008 7:22 AM #316829
Only if the spit is so dense. <.<

Thanks for the comments, guys.
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Dec 18, 2008 5:47 PM #317099
the thing nest to his head looks like a UFO...
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Dec 19, 2008 6:58 AM #317632
Colors are gorgeous, and the basic design is nice. But there are a few flaws.

The neck seems weird, like everyone has said.

The right-back leg seems a bit off prospective, it looks longer and bigger than the one closest to you.

But other than those minor details, good work! I would like to see more challenging stuff from you though. Dragons, dinos, etc are relatively easy to draw. They don't take very much creativity and from a side view they really aren't hard at all.
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Dec 19, 2008 10:22 AM #317712
Mmhm. Thanks for the comment, SidewaysBox. What challenge do you propose?
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Dec 20, 2008 10:25 PM #318581
Not really challenging, but I remember you used to make neat little characters and stuff. Don't get me wrong, these dragon pictures are really good, I just miss your other stuff.
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Dec 20, 2008 10:30 PM #318583
i dont reme,mber whichstuff :(
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Dec 20, 2008 10:52 PM #318591
http://fc66.deviantart.com/fs29/f/2008/089/8/f/Erkling_by_Manthur.jpg
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Dec 21, 2008 4:10 AM #318819
the horns looks like ears