Well, in my last animation, it had improper movements. I did a test to try and improve that. Tell me what I need to work on.

http://antiup.net/view.php?id=2819644836movements%20test.swf

And Spazmodan, don't do the same thing as in the last thread, fag. Thanks.

Ok here we go, it was wobbly and the walk was still alittle weird looking but it was better, try to make smaller stick sizes, dont use the biggest brush size, use the 3d from the biggest,

Is he walking, or floating?
And was he humping the air at the end? LOL!

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Is he walking, or floating?
And was he humping the air at the end? LOL!

yah he luvs air penis ahhahah ur so funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! **** off, noob. I don't have to have a back ground. Douche.

Dragonhawk, it was not the biggest brush size.

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yah he luvs air penis ahhahah ur so funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! **** off, noob. I don't have to have a back ground. Douche.

Dragonhawk, it was not the biggest brush size.

We have so much in common. I'll say though, this was very wobbly and messy too.

You're not giving any advice!
Saying "its wobbly and messy" doesnt help him at all!
At least tell him how to improve, or even better, just stay out of his threads for a while. Its bound to start an arguement.

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You're not giving any advice!
Saying "its wobbly and messy" doesnt help him at all!
At least tell him how to improve, or even better, just stay out of his threads for a while. Its bound to start an arguement.

Good call, but I believe if I give him advice or not he'll start cussing me out just because i'm not a "Pro" but anyways...

You might want to make his head a little bigger and more circular. Try using the circle tool and make it into a symbol - Right click > Convert To Symbol, and you won't have to redraw it. By the looks of it, your stick seems to slide, but it's hard to tell since there is no floor. He also resizes. That's all I see out of this. Good luck with your animations, someone else might give a more thorough review.

EDIT: Also, his punch didn't seem very forceful and wasn't long enough.

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Good call, but I believe if I give him advice or not he'll start cussing me out just because i'm not a "Pro" but anyways...

You might want to make his head a little bigger and more circular. Try using the circle tool and make it into a symbol - Right click > Convert To Symbol, and you won't have to redraw it. By the looks of it, your stick seems to slide, but it's hard to tell since there is no floor. He also resizes. That's all I see out of this. Good luck with your animations, someone else might give a more thorough review.

EDIT: Also, his punch didn't seem very forceful and wasn't long enough.

Finally, you give some normal advice. I appreciate all advice that isn't faggy, like ck2100s shit advice.

I don't need pro advice, but at least some thats helpful, which you finally gave.

Thats better.
Have a cookie.
*lobs cookie at spazmodans head*
edit: CK-whatever's "advice" wasnt even advice. He just liked the idea of a stickman humping something, it turns him on.

He resizes alot, do you use the grid?
Also looks as though he was moving downwards. Might just be my eyes.
Quite stiff, but you'll get better as people do.
Probably better than some stuff i've come out with.
Keep it up.

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yah he luvs air penis ahhahah ur so funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! **** off, noob. I don't have to have a back ground. Douche.

Dragonhawk, it was not the biggest brush size.

Why u call everyone a noob? Your the only noob I see!

neat! Kinda messy though... wiggles alot.

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Why u call everyone a noob? Your the only noob I see!

My definition of "noob" a new member who acts like a faggot and can't spell correctly.

You gave horrible advice that was no use to me at all. Humping the air? OH YOUR SO FUNNY! Leave.

I am not new. I am not immature. I don't give SHITTY advice. I don't spell "you" as "u"

But you do. Your logic is flawed and horrible, you don't know bull shit about anything. Leave my thread. Damn noobs these days. You gave shit advice, it didn't help me. I tried to get you, a noob, out of my thread. The end, fag.