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soac

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Dec 24, 2008 2:12 AM #321047
This is my animation. I am not finished but still a work in progress. I want opinions and some constructive criticism? Thanks!

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Kalik911

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Dec 24, 2008 2:28 AM #321060
I don't wanna rate since I havent posted here much. (Not to say I dont animate, I just dont post)

Um, some of the movements are choppy, the effect is nice (lightening), I dont like the mid air thing where hes going up and falling, I think you should have animated him actually fully going off the screen when the OJ guy throws him (rather than just changing "scene")[if you know what I mean]...

Its ok though
megaanims
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Dec 24, 2008 3:32 AM #321105
quite chopy and uneased in most parts but nice though
jsnake04

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Dec 24, 2008 11:21 AM #321299
lol i dont like the blood spirting out from a punch... but whatever.. i little un eased etc.. but still pretty gd
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Dec 24, 2008 11:53 AM #321307
You should post in the beginners section to get serious CC. Yeah. Close this before you get flamed.
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Dec 24, 2008 8:20 PM #321485
Quote from eimyz
You should post in the beginners section to get serious CC. Yeah. Close this before you get flamed.


eimyz is so rite go o the begginer section... and lock this before you get flamed as eimyz said
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Dec 24, 2008 9:06 PM #321503
Low beginner.
Choppy, uneased, and stiff as ****.
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Dec 24, 2008 11:56 PM #321618
Chopy and uneased.
But continue this :D
Cuzz teh idea is cool :D
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Dec 25, 2008 2:30 PM #322003
Why did you use the chidori effect give sum creds to the maker or sumthing
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Dec 25, 2008 11:36 PM #322326
If i used ratings, i'd say TAKE MORE DAMN TIME ON YOUR ANIMATIONS.
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Dec 27, 2008 5:50 PM #323231
well i dont wanna get banned again so i would say
just work on everything and look at bahas tutorial on DD
but considering we want some flaming going....
HORRIBLE
no use of anything in particular
just mindless horible animation bits combined together to make one really bad animation!
let the flaming begin
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