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Started by: zans | Replies: 4 | Views: 352

zans

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Dec 25, 2008 8:52 PM #322161
hey, i've been practicing, but could i get tips on improving instead of just strait critisism plz?

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=317102


http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=519546

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=689614

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=444469
proslayar

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Dec 25, 2008 9:01 PM #322173
that looks really cool, i cant give advice cause im a noob but it looks really cool, espically the last three. O, and what FPS do you use?
zans

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Dec 25, 2008 9:05 PM #322175
thanks, and 24FPS the only fps thats not to slow and not to fast XD
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Dec 25, 2008 9:07 PM #322180
Oh woah, it's like a mix of Mraznbuddy andddd strifers :)!

brilliant combo srsly, the style really sticks to me!

You need to work on fluidity.. movements can be eased more etc. but yeah keep up the style yo.
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Dec 26, 2008 3:30 AM #322442
looks really good, well i think