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Tawnik
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Mar 17, 2008 7:54 PM #94153
Yes yes yes :]

http://flost.shiftlimits.com/view/OIFHT4av-tZq

C & C please

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Mar 17, 2008 8:18 PM #94176
It was good, only you could have eased the end a bit more (The last kick) cause it looked so. Boom and stopped right away, and the first elbow, the lines where weird.
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Mar 17, 2008 8:20 PM #94180
I think your getting rusty Tawnik!

That last kick was VERY choppy D:
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Mar 17, 2008 8:58 PM #94206
the last kick WAS rusty but it was still good, i see you tried to make it look fast. That why you added so little frames to it? (thats what i do, thats why i asked.)

also the frist punch should not have just dropped how it did. In a jab you quickly bring your hand back after the punch. so the turning would have probably started with the arm already in.

Nice uppercutt.
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Mar 17, 2008 9:32 PM #94239
What does it mean rusty ??

Ty :)
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Mar 17, 2008 10:45 PM #94285
lol sorry meant choppy..
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Mar 17, 2008 10:54 PM #94292
looks more undone to me rather then choppy. just finnish up the kick, and your good.
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Mar 17, 2008 10:59 PM #94298
wow i like the sketchy style a lot but the last kick had to have been like 4 frames??? idk
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Mar 18, 2008 1:34 AM #94407
I don't think that this style fits with fighting movies. srsly
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Mar 18, 2008 8:24 PM #94810
I know it Tman,but I just tried it :]

The end is choppy right ?