Dead-Shot's First 4 Animations

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Dead-Shot

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Mar 17, 2008 9:56 PM #94256
These are the only animations ive made so far, and also, they are my first.
I really want some info on how i did so i can know what i can do to improve :D

So... links...

Running - http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1205785280
Punching - http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1205784748
Teleportation - http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1205785344
Avitar - http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1205785736

So what do you all think?

Edit - Avitar link fixed.
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Mar 17, 2008 10:01 PM #94258
Well they weren't the worst that I have ever seen.

The running was alright just that his legs got to small when they were unders his body, and the movements were a little off.

The punching wouldn't be that bad, if there was some easing, just add easing and make sure it doesn't resize.

The teleportation was my favorite, it was pretty good, just work on your particles and movements again.

Keep at it and you will be there.
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Mar 17, 2008 10:04 PM #94262
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Well they weren't the worst that I have ever seen.

The running was alright just that his legs got to small when they were unders his body, and the movements were a little off.

The punching wouldn't be that bad, if there was some easing, just add easing and make sure it doesn't resize.

The teleportation was my favorite, it was pretty good, just work on your particles and movements again.

Keep at it and you will be there.


Ok, cool, and thanks!
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Mar 17, 2008 10:09 PM #94264
If those are your firsts, they are great. Listen to Beatbox, and you'll grow fast in skill.
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Mar 17, 2008 10:28 PM #94275
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If those are your firsts, they are great. Listen to Beatbox, and you'll grow fast in skill.


He might grow in other things too :D.


Just kidding.
It was good so far but try to no resize the stick so much and when he runs, have the figure run and not just have the legs pivot around him.
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Mar 17, 2008 10:30 PM #94276
Wow, those are REALLY good for firsts. Pretty smooth, and basic easing.

Keep it up, man, I think you'll be good, soon.
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Mar 17, 2008 10:32 PM #94277
Quote from kinto
He might grow in other things too :D.


Just kidding.
It was good so far but try to no resize the stick so much and when he runs, have the figure run and not just have the legs pivot around him.


Noted :D Thanks
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Mar 17, 2008 10:41 PM #94281
Those are nice for your first animations!
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Mar 18, 2008 11:32 PM #95059
Nice job, way better then my first,
Other than that strange grey line on the punch they all look good.
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Mar 19, 2008 12:17 AM #95106
Grids and/or a guiding layer is very helpful to prevent resizing. You are on your way, nice work.
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Mar 19, 2008 12:29 AM #95118
Nice work. The running was a bit sloppy but the teleportation was great. It was basic, but wasn't bad. The punching wasn't all that bad either. Good work for your first animations.