Begginer or not?

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Jan 1, 2009 5:24 AM #326086
Im new to stickpage and forums all together so im not sure whether i should be in the begginer thread or not. Just some of my animations, please comment and give constructive criticism.

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This one isn't complete, i know the smoke(or smoke idk) effect is horrible

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one of my best and fastest animations

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i made this one to pwn my friend

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Made this one for fun and it was a background text(i know the running sucks)
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Jan 1, 2009 8:19 PM #326430
I thought that they were pretty good, you need some work though.

I liked the style your using, it's interesting.
Your sticks were way to stiff, add some easing to them.

Hmmmm, I'd say post a few times in the beginner's section,
so you can get some more C&C.
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Jan 2, 2009 9:30 PM #327161
Thanks man, but what do you mean by stiff? they dont move enough?
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Jan 3, 2009 1:52 AM #327454
Stiff as in, not enough bending of limbs, just add more frames of movement.
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Jan 3, 2009 10:03 PM #328381
It's cool,but like said earlier sticks are a little stiff
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Jan 3, 2009 10:28 PM #328403
O man! Your god awful, you animations hurt my eyes! Go die in a whole noob!
Is all it would say I said if you didnt highlight this part of my message. Like previously stated the sticks are stiff and their joints arent moving very much. However I do like what your doing, it makes your animations look hectic and intense, but a bit too much because everything is pretty much the same colour. Keep up the good work and you wont have to post in the beginners section anymore :D
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Jan 4, 2009 12:24 AM #328494
Hmm....you are better than a begginer...

interesting style
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Jan 4, 2009 2:28 AM #328537
lol your animations remind me of geometry class with all the triangles, squares circles, etc. but ya a little less stiffness and i like your style, better than beginner
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Jan 19, 2009 12:32 AM #340474
they're much better than mine.
have you ever heard of Bert?
he does pivot, and it looks like his style.
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Jan 23, 2009 12:35 AM #343315
I wudnt sauy that looks like bert. But what do I no? Anyway I love the fast pacedness they have, like said above just add in a few more frames of movent. But ur pretty good, I reckon not beginner.
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Feb 4, 2009 6:14 PM #352058
not beginner... but..one thing is hard for you... walking/running
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Feb 5, 2009 12:27 AM #352215
Quote from shinelt
not beginner... but..one thing is hard for you... walking/running

yeah my runnning is horrible
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Feb 5, 2009 8:33 PM #352615
that vids are amazing.. i can't do it better..!!
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Feb 5, 2009 9:56 PM #352690
Quote from Tommysenf
that vids are amazing.. i can't do it better..!!

are you some sort of master of easytoon or something? but yeah, denuchi1 you been working on any more?
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Feb 6, 2009 2:34 AM #352777
Quote from Fazz-
are you some sort of master of easytoon or something? but yeah, denuchi1 you been working on any more?


yeah i am, and i actually started a new thread(this wasnt doing good before)
its called project theta(Deadzone)...its a continuation of the first animation on here

thanks everyone for the compliments!