Im new to stickpage and forums all together so im not sure whether i should be in the begginer thread or not. Just some of my animations, please comment and give constructive criticism.


This one isn't complete, i know the smoke(or smoke idk) effect is horrible


one of my best and fastest animations


i made this one to pwn my friend


Made this one for fun and it was a background text(i know the running sucks)

I thought that they were pretty good, you need some work though.

I liked the style your using, it's interesting.
Your sticks were way to stiff, add some easing to them.

Hmmmm, I'd say post a few times in the beginner's section,
so you can get some more C&C.

Thanks man, but what do you mean by stiff? they dont move enough?

Stiff as in, not enough bending of limbs, just add more frames of movement.

It's cool,but like said earlier sticks are a little stiff

O man! Your god awful, you animations hurt my eyes! Go die in a whole noob!
Is all it would say I said if you didnt highlight this part of my message. Like previously stated the sticks are stiff and their joints arent moving very much. However I do like what your doing, it makes your animations look hectic and intense, but a bit too much because everything is pretty much the same colour. Keep up the good work and you wont have to post in the beginners section anymore :D

lol your animations remind me of geometry class with all the triangles, squares circles, etc. but ya a little less stiffness and i like your style, better than beginner

they're much better than mine.
have you ever heard of Bert?
he does pivot, and it looks like his style.

I wudnt sauy that looks like bert. But what do I no? Anyway I love the fast pacedness they have, like said above just add in a few more frames of movent. But ur pretty good, I reckon not beginner.

not beginner... but..one thing is hard for you... walking/running

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not beginner... but..one thing is hard for you... walking/running

yeah my runnning is horrible

that vids are amazing.. i can't do it better..!!

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that vids are amazing.. i can't do it better..!!

are you some sort of master of easytoon or something? but yeah, denuchi1 you been working on any more?

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are you some sort of master of easytoon or something? but yeah, denuchi1 you been working on any more?

yeah i am, and i actually started a new thread(this wasnt doing good before)
its called project theta(Deadzone)...its a continuation of the first animation on here

thanks everyone for the compliments!