I wanted to make a FB. It's also a blood test. Criticism please.

http://antiup.net/files/2011685114lolz.swf

Really bad, the movements were horrid.

Work on basics, WALKING.

Also the blood, didnt work for me, add some flow, and make it drip on the floor.

mmkay .

LOL! That was hilarious. You need to fix up your guy, his limbs are bouncing all over the place then his head just explodes, lmao!

Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

Practicing drawing and whatnot first.

my only advice to you is to do sticks.

After you have basic movements down, start using skeletons and sketch fullbodies to get the drift of it, THEN move on to actually fullbody.

And if your lazy just keep going and we'll be forced lie and say it was great.

Shrinkage, walk needs work. Blood needs to look better.

:D

the face looked like f*ck

if i were you i'd draw some wire frames first so that you would have a guide. ^^

Quote from javarush214

the face looked like f*ck

if i were you i'd draw some wire frames first so that you would have a guide. ^^

wtf??? rofl. The head was a bit weird. But it was good otherwise.

not so good ...

It was real nice! The body jumps a little, but can easily be improved, the blood was ok, but spread wierd, also it looked like he was shrinking.

it really wasnt good. the blood needs major improvement, the guy walks quite badly and he shrinks majorly. keep trying though :)