I wanted to make a FB. It's also a blood test. Criticism please.
http://antiup.net/files/2011685114lolz.swf
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Mar 18, 2008 3:43 AM #94490
Mar 18, 2008 3:52 AM #94498
Really bad, the movements were horrid.
Work on basics, WALKING.
Also the blood, didnt work for me, add some flow, and make it drip on the floor.
Work on basics, WALKING.
Also the blood, didnt work for me, add some flow, and make it drip on the floor.
Mar 18, 2008 3:54 AM #94500
mmkay .
Mar 18, 2008 4:23 AM #94523
LOL! That was hilarious. You need to fix up your guy, his limbs are bouncing all over the place then his head just explodes, lmao!
Mar 18, 2008 4:33 AM #94526
Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.
Practicing drawing and whatnot first.
Practicing drawing and whatnot first.
Mar 18, 2008 4:49 AM #94529
my only advice to you is to do sticks.
After you have basic movements down, start using skeletons and sketch fullbodies to get the drift of it, THEN move on to actually fullbody.
And if your lazy just keep going and we'll be forced lie and say it was great.
After you have basic movements down, start using skeletons and sketch fullbodies to get the drift of it, THEN move on to actually fullbody.
And if your lazy just keep going and we'll be forced lie and say it was great.
Mar 18, 2008 6:17 AM #94548
Shrinkage, walk needs work. Blood needs to look better.
:D
:D
Mar 18, 2008 10:22 AM #94607
the face looked like f*ck
if i were you i'd draw some wire frames first so that you would have a guide. ^^
if i were you i'd draw some wire frames first so that you would have a guide. ^^
Mar 18, 2008 2:53 PM #94651
Quote from javarush214the face looked like f*ck
if i were you i'd draw some wire frames first so that you would have a guide. ^^
wtf??? rofl. The head was a bit weird. But it was good otherwise.
Mar 18, 2008 3:57 PM #94696
not so good ...
Mar 18, 2008 6:01 PM #94748
It was real nice! The body jumps a little, but can easily be improved, the blood was ok, but spread wierd, also it looked like he was shrinking.
Mar 18, 2008 6:39 PM #94766
it really wasnt good. the blood needs major improvement, the guy walks quite badly and he shrinks majorly. keep trying though :)