one of my first videos

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Jan 6, 2009 8:16 PM #330667
heres one of my first videos

backflip with hand

tell me what you think.
criticism is welcome!
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Jan 6, 2009 8:24 PM #330677
M'kay.
U pwn man!
I LOVE U :D
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Jan 6, 2009 8:26 PM #330680
whoa thanks:Smile:
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Jan 6, 2009 8:41 PM #330693
Begginers section please. The animation was very stiff and I didn't like the stick at all. Nice try though and keep practising
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Jan 6, 2009 9:12 PM #330735
You animate as good as I do know, well, with pivot. To give you an idea of how good that is, it's High-beginner level. But just make sure that you don't accidentally move something unwanted during the animating process, Cause I saw the leg twitch.
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Jan 6, 2009 9:25 PM #330746
Well thanks for all the criticism i will put it to
good use:Happy:
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Jan 7, 2009 4:02 AM #331060
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You animate as good as I do know, well, with pivot. To give you an idea of how good that is, it's High-beginner level. But just make sure that you don't accidentally move something unwanted during the animating process, Cause I saw the leg twitch.


No it was not, it was low beginner to be honest. The were no physics or easing to be seen, along with stiffness. However I will give him props for attempting the ever so challenging back flip. Just look in the tutorial section powerfuse0 made a fairly kickass tutorial on how to do a back flip.
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Jan 7, 2009 7:04 AM #331171
I agree with Necrotic mannequin
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Jan 7, 2009 8:21 AM #331192
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I agree with Necrotic mannequin


Indeed,many people do.
Also I recommend learning to make a stick figure run and walk long before you attempt flips. Because not only do you have to figure out a certain way to ease and space but you then have to perfect a landing as to were running and walking are a few simple motions.
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Jan 7, 2009 9:35 AM #331233
stiff, bad easing, ... - LOW BEGINNER, and the "camera move" is choppy
so, you should post this into beg section
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Jan 7, 2009 6:55 PM #331491
i will try too make it better next time.
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Jan 7, 2009 9:22 PM #331592
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well it was my first try though.


Stop right there, never, EVER use excuses. Ever, just be like "Thanks I will have to try that" or " I will do better next time" excuses are the first path to failure.
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Jan 8, 2009 12:16 AM #331768
um the back flip when his hands touched the ground they slid
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Jan 8, 2009 11:04 AM #332116
Quote from NecroticMannequin
No it was not, it was low beginner to be honest. The were no physics or easing to be seen, along with stiffness. However I will give him props for attempting the ever so challenging back flip. Just look in the tutorial section powerfuse0 made a fairly kickass tutorial on how to do a back flip.


do u always use super lituratic english?
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Jan 8, 2009 7:31 PM #332276
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do u always use super lituratic english?


Even if I do, I am still yet to comprehend and reach the epiphany of what that has to do with any relevance, or the animation itself. And assuming it does not, it still has completely nothing to do with the animation. Not that I care.

There really was no movements, however I think one of your flaws is positioning and bad sticks.