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HEy Guys! Tomorrow I have a Book presentation at School. My Book is:
Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. I've wrote the following text about it.
So, read it please and tell me if there is a mistake.

"The story begins with a young boy, named Charlie Bucket, who is living with his parents and his Grandparents in a little house near a big Chocolate Factory. Owner of this Chocolate Factory is Willy Wonka. Charlie hears lots of amazing stories about the genius candy maker Willy Wonka and the huge chocolate Factory he has built. As time passed Wonka began to suspect that other Candymakers were stealing his recipes and so, in conclusion to that, he fired all his workers and announced that he is going out of business forever. The Gates are locked and nobody knows who works for Wonka now. Nobody except Willy Wonka and his workers has seen the Factory behind the Gates before. But, before he quits, he starts a worldwide Contest in which five golden tickets are hidden in his chocolate bars. The prize for those who find them is a Tour of the factory. Millions of people try to find them, spending all the money the own just to visit this factory. After a while four children found the golden ticket.
The first child to obtain a golden ticket is Augustus Gloop. He is A really fat and Greedy boy. He can never eat enough to keep him satisfied.
The second to find a golden ticket in their chocolate bar is Mike Teavee. A television obssessed and weapon freak, lover of cowboys (possibly homosexual).
Veruca Salt is the third. She is the Daughter of a rich industry owner and very spoiled. She gets all that she wants by just fluttering her eyelashes.
And, the last, but not least, is Violet Beauregarde. She is very ambitious. The record holder for the biggest Bubble gum bubble blown.
Only one Ticket hasn't been found yet.
Charlie also tried to find it but he hasn’t luck. But one day he finds money on the ground, ironically enough to get him a Wonka bar, and so he buys one. It has the last Golden Ticket in it! Didn't see that coming.
On the next day these 5 Children and their adult Companions go to the Factory.
Wonka leads the Children and the adults through the 4 main rooms of the factory. In every room one child is unfortunate enough to find their adventure at an end.
The very first room is the "Chocolate Room". Everything in this room is enjoyable. The grass and the pavement are made of Chocolate. The pumpkins are filled with jelly beans and lollypops. Augustus Gloop the fat and greedy child, the first winner of a ticket, falls into a river while drinking from it and is sucked up a pipe, to get stuck there. He was simply too greedy for his own good.
The second room they visit is the "Inventing Room". All the Ideas from Mr. Wonka are occurring in this room. I Can't remember if this is where they find the new bubblegum and try it?
Thridly they enter the "Nut Sorting Room", in this room Wonka uses trained Squirrels to break walnuts for use in his sweets.Veruca Salt sees the squirrels and immediately asks her father to buy her one. As she wants a squirrel for a pet. After breaking out into song she falls into a rubbish chute when she attempts to grab something.
Fourth, "The Television Room". Home to Wonka´s latest invention->

Only Charley was still on! All the other children were Victims of their own negative properties. Charlie becomes the new owner of Chocolate Factory, after proving he is capable. From the poor Young Child to the Rich Factory Owner!

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HEy Guys! Tomorrow I have a BookPresendation at School! My Book is:
Charlie and the Chocolate Factory and Ive wrote the Following text about it.
So Read it pls and Tell me if there is a mistake! ;)

The Story begins with a young boy named Charlie Bucket who is living with his parents and his Grandparents in a little house near a big Chocolate Factory.! Owner of this Chocolate Factory is Willy Wonka. Charlie hears lots of amazing stories about the genius candy maker Willy Wonka and the huge chocolate Factory he has built. And as time passed Wonka begin to suspect that other Candymakers steal his recipes and so he fired all his workers and announced that he is going out of business forever. The Gates are locked and nobody knows who works for Wonka now. Nobody except Willy Wonka and his workers has seen the Factory behind the Gates before. But before he quits, he starts a worldwide Contest in which Five Golden Tickets are hidden in his Chocolate bars. The prize for those who find them is a Tour of the factory. Millions of people try to find them. And After a while 4 Children found The Golden Ticket.
(The first Child is)Augustus Gloop: He is A really fad and Greedy boy. He can’t eat enough.
(The second is)Mike Teavee: Television obssessed and a Weapon Freak
Veruca Salt is the third: She is the Daughter of a rich Industry owner and very spoiled. She gets all that she wants
And the last is Violet Beauregarde: She is very ambitious ->Record for the biggest Bubble gum bubble.
Only one Ticket hasn´t been found yet. Charlie also tried to find it but he hasn’t luck. But one day he finds Money on the ground and buys a Chocolate Bar…with the last Golden Ticket in it!
On the next day these 5 Children and their adult Companions go to the Factory.
Wonka leads the Children and the adults Trough the 4 main rooms of the factory. And in every Room one Child disappears.
1. Chocolate Room: Everything in this room is enjoyable. The grass and the pavement are out of Chocolate. The pumpkins are filled with jelly beans and lollypops and and and. (Augustus Gloop(fad and greedy) falls into a river while drinking from it and sucks in a pipe .he was simply too Greedy)
2. Inventing Room: All the Ideas from Mr. Wonka are occurring in this room ( )
3. The Nut Sorting Room: in this room Wonka uses trained Squirrels to break walnuts for use in his sweets.(Veruca Salt see the squirrel/ask father because wants a squirrel for a pet, but she falls into the rubbish chute when she attempts to grab it .)->> Too
4. The Television Room: Is home to Wonka´s latest invention->

Only Charley was still on! All the other children were Victims of their own negative Properties. And Charlie becomes the new owner of Chocolate Factory. From the poor Young Child to the Rich Factory Owner!