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lol being a dick is so funny, good one bro.

Honestly I don't see why you guys are being such assholes. The kid's foreign and he's asking for you to help him edit it so it sounds more fluent. If you're not going to help, you don't have to keep telling him that his English is bad (since that's basically the whole point of this thread).

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I would be lying if I said I was not confused by some points. You've missed many parts of the movie out, from what I remember. You also wasted my time. Thanks.

He was talking about the book.

The Story begins with a young pimp named Charlie Bucket who is living with his pedophiles and his Grandparents in a little house near a big Condom Factory.! Owner of this Condom Factory is Willy Wonka. Charlie hears lots of amazing stories about the genius sex-toy maker Willy Wonka and the huge condom Factory he has built. And as time passed Wonka begin to suspect that other Condommakers steal his recipes and so he fired all his workers and announced that he is going out of business forever. The Gates are locked and nobody knows who works for Wonka now. Nobody except Willy Wonka and his workers has seen the Factory behind the Gates before. But before he quits, he starts a worldwide Contest in which Five Golden Tickets are hidden in his condoms. The prize for those who find them is to view Willy Wonka's "special place". Millions of people try to find them. And After a while 4 Children found The Golden Tickets.
(The first Child is)Augustus Gloop: He is A really fad and Greedy boy. He can’t eat enough. His favorite thing to eat is pussy.
(The second is)Mike Teavee: Television obssessed and a Weapon Freak
Veruca Salt is the third: She is the Daughter of a rich Industry owner and very spoiled. She gets all that she wants, especially from men.
And the last is Violet Beauregarde: She is very ambitious ->Record for the biggest Bubble gum bubble.
Only one Ticket hasn´t been found yet. Charlie also tried to find it but he hasn’t had luck. But one day he finds Money on the ground and buys a Condom…with the last Golden Ticket in it!
On the next day these 5 Children and their adult Companions go to the Factory.
Wonka leads the Children and the adults Trough the 4 main rooms of the factory. And in every Room one Child "disappears" with Willy for a time.
1. Chocolate Room: Everything in this room is enjoyable. The grass and the pavement are out of Chocolate. The pumpkins are filled with jelly beans and lollipops and and and. (Augustus Gloop(fad and greedy) falls into a river while drinking from it and sucks in a pipe .he was simply too Greedy)
2. Inventing Room: All the Ideas from Mr. Wonka are occurring in this room
3. The Nut Sorting Room: in this room Wonka uses trained Squirrels to play with his nuts.(Veruca Salt see the squirrel/ask father because wants a squirrel for a pet, but she falls into the rubbish chute when she attempts to grab it .)->> Too
4. The Television Room: Is home to Wonka´s latest invention->

Only Charley was still on! All the other children were Victims of their own negative Properties. And Charlie becomes the new owner of Condom Factory. From the poor Young Child to the Rich Factory Owner!






Listen, I'm sorry that everyone else on this forum is immature. I corrected your writing for you. You did a good job, with only a few mistakes. I used sophisticated and cohesive grammar, you are guaranteed and "A."

It's called spellcheck, undeather. USE IT.

Faggot ass shit right there.