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Jan 8, 2009 4:44 AM #332005
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Jan 8, 2009 4:59 AM #332015
I'm almost 100 percent positive I just threw up in my mouth. And on my desk somewhat.




Not going to be a dick though. What made me say that was...the proportions were so awful they make her look gross....sort of like some freaky porn fetish.
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Jan 8, 2009 5:00 AM #332016
Good for you, go clean it up

I do needa work on my porportions a bit
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Jan 8, 2009 6:15 AM #332039
where is her penis
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Jan 8, 2009 4:52 PM #332214
just to give an idea of the incorrect proportions, here is something similar:

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The problem with your proportions, is that the legs, neck, and thigh are too big. The neck just needs you to replace those two lines coming from it to look right, but the thigh and legs are massive. Her front-facing foot is also drawn a little incorrectly. Because her foot is flat against the ground, the point in which her lower leg ends and her foot begins is too high. Oh, and some of the shading is too thick, causing her arms to look more round than they really are.
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Jan 8, 2009 9:27 PM #332351
Oh my god you're still active? 0_o

anyhow, she's missing shoulders. And ofcourse the proportions are wrong, just look at any draws female these days, I seldom see realistic.
Also the shading is weird. It's the shading is too havy which reaches his pinacle at the arms.
If you're going to shade that heavy, do it more realistic and gradually.
And her face doesn't fit the body.

It's not bad, but she's not a very pretty site either.
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