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Jan 11, 2009 10:27 AM #334639
i posted this in the beginners' thread like last week, but i want pro comments if i improved, so please saha rab and zawmb please tell me what you think


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Jan 11, 2009 10:37 AM #334655
Making the screen black instead of showing him getting hit by the beam-thingy was very lazy
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Jan 11, 2009 10:41 AM #334659
Everything was too slow. Especially when he bounces off of the ground at the end
the spacing's not very good either
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Jan 11, 2009 11:04 AM #334691
less choppiness, more easing, more faster, more better sticks, more attention to physics, less shitty.
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Jan 11, 2009 11:17 AM #334706
Beginner section please, no one told you to come out and that animation doesn't prove you're ready.

It's way too slow, the gravity is really shit, you don't ease in the air.
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Jan 11, 2009 1:40 PM #334787
mannnn okay, i used to post mine in the beginner's thread but i think no pro goes there so i posted outside hehe thanks guys for the comments,
i appreciate it :D i will do better next time ^.^
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Jan 12, 2009 10:46 AM #335504
fps needs to be higher
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Jan 12, 2009 7:10 PM #335774
Choopy and stiff, move every limb ever frame. The stiffness was the worst part about this animation.
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Jan 12, 2009 7:21 PM #335781
OOH OOH ME! ME!
*puts hand up*
ME! ME ME!

Its stiff and slowww :)
Fx can be better 2 :D
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Jan 12, 2009 9:53 PM #335842
move the joints more, don't just move the whole thing. work on physics too. instead of making something like this, try making more of a simulation of things that happen instead of following crappy tutorials. Your animations wont look good if you keep doing what you're doing now. change your style.
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Jan 18, 2009 7:44 AM #339934
stiff and uneased, speed up fps
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