i posted this in the beginners' thread like last week, but i want pro comments if i improved, so please saha rab and zawmb please tell me what you think

Making the screen black instead of showing him getting hit by the beam-thingy was very lazy

Everything was too slow. Especially when he bounces off of the ground at the end
the spacing's not very good either

less choppiness, more easing, more faster, more better sticks, more attention to physics, less shitty.

mannnn okay, i used to post mine in the beginner's thread but i think no pro goes there so i posted outside hehe thanks guys for the comments,
i appreciate it :D i will do better next time ^.^

fps needs to be higher

Choopy and stiff, move every limb ever frame. The stiffness was the worst part about this animation.

OOH OOH ME! ME!
*puts hand up*
ME! ME ME!

Its stiff and slowww :)
Fx can be better 2 :D

move the joints more, don't just move the whole thing. work on physics too. instead of making something like this, try making more of a simulation of things that happen instead of following crappy tutorials. Your animations wont look good if you keep doing what you're doing now. change your style.

stiff and uneased, speed up fps