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BSE R2 (2nd anim)

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herbivore

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Jan 23, 2009 6:44 PM #343689
This is my second animation. I made it for BSE R2.

LINK: http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=986021

Hopefully I've improved. C&C would be appreciated. :)

Thanks.
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Jan 23, 2009 6:46 PM #343691
Pretty cool actually, only thing i dont like about it is the bit of talking at the beginning, which is both pointless and annoying.
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Jan 23, 2009 10:45 PM #343842
it was good, but it slowed down at the end. It looked like he was already dead, but then the guy went and snapped his neck. i didn't get that.
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Jan 24, 2009 2:02 AM #343989
Quote from doodl3pin
Pretty cool actually, only thing i dont like about it is the bit of talking at the beginning, which is both pointless and annoying.


OK, I'll keep that in mind next time lol.

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it was good, but it slowed down at the end. It looked like he was already dead, but then the guy went and snapped his neck. i didn't get that.


Yeah it kind of felt that way while animating it.

Thanks for the comments. :)
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Jan 24, 2009 1:08 PM #344266
Holy shit, I can't believe that's your second animation!
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Jan 24, 2009 1:49 PM #344288
It wasn't very clean, but it was smooth and the camera distortion on the hits was very well done, especially on the fourth. That said, you still have some work to do. For a start, animate a little bit bigger so the limbs aren't so crowded.
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Jan 24, 2009 3:02 PM #344315
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Holy shit, I can't believe that's your second animation!


Thanks Shanto! :)

Quote from Bonk
It wasn't very clean, but it was smooth and the camera distortion on the hits was very well done, especially on the fourth. That said, you still have some work to do. For a start, animate a little bit bigger so the limbs aren't so crowded.


OK, thanks for the comments! I use 200% zoom with the brush tool on max, so maybe I'll try zooming 150-200%.

Glad you liked the camera work though. Just wondering, what exactly do you mean by clean? Is it that its not quite clear whats happening?
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Jan 25, 2009 2:02 AM #344850
wow great job!
i really liked how the camera moved.
but try to not make every single hit all epic n such.
only the SUPER EPIC DEATHITS should be THAT
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Jan 25, 2009 2:29 AM #344888
Quote from flip
wow great job!
i really liked how the camera moved.
but try to not make every single hit all epic n such.
only the SUPER EPIC DEATHITS should be THAT


Yeah I know what you mean, lol. Thanks for the comments! :)