Like the title says these are three songs I wrote, from most recent to oldest. Click the link and leave me a comment or crits on here or on the song, it would really help me out. Lyrics are in the info.
Sheep
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CiL0k5ravgQ&feature=channel_page
Plastic Masks
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Z4xzZvQnZc&feature=channel_page
Roses
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zpSo4Hn0fXE&feature=channel_page
Three of My Own Songs on Electric Guitar.
Started by: bfsrox | Replies: 3 | Views: 315
Jan 25, 2009 3:15 AM #344922
Jan 25, 2009 3:30 AM #344930
First two songs got old pretty quick, it sounded like you were playing the same type of chords on different roots, to the point where they sounded out of key.
Third song was a lot better than the other two.
Third song was a lot better than the other two.
Jan 25, 2009 8:47 AM #345189
The chords sound very Nirvana-ish. Third one is the best by far though.
Jan 26, 2009 12:27 AM #345700
Yeah, thanx for the crits, Roses was the first one I wrote, so I'm basically just trying to experiment with different sounds right now. I think the reason the other ones got old is cause it's just guitar, I could probably make them a lot better if I had an actual band, which is what I want to do. And yeah, to Wartooth: Nirvana has a HUGE influence on my music, but as I said I'm just experimenting at the moment.