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Feb 1, 2009 9:14 PM #350236
for my collab.

should i continue?

http://cizzil.deviantart.com/art/Future-fighting-test-111461914
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Feb 1, 2009 9:28 PM #350242
Lovin in so far, its nicely animated, and i love the leg attachment :) keep going
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Feb 2, 2009 2:27 AM #350478
Thanks man, I think i'll continue.
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Feb 2, 2009 3:56 AM #350513
Continue with it please. :)
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Feb 2, 2009 1:04 PM #350763
Thanks, any advice guys?
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Feb 2, 2009 2:10 PM #350789
Needs more exaggeration.
More fluidity.
Its a little shaky here and there also.

Those things lack the viewer to carry on watching , you need the viewer to like every part of it and enjoy it if it were 5 minutes.

You improved a fuking bunch though.
Nice effects =]
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Feb 3, 2009 1:12 AM #351131
Quote from M3D
Needs more exaggeration.
More fluidity.
Its a little shaky here and there also.

Those things lack the viewer to carry on watching , you need the viewer to like every part of it and enjoy it if it were 5 minutes.

You improved a fuking bunch though.
Nice effects =]


Thanks man, i'll try and work on that
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Feb 3, 2009 6:37 AM #351280
BIG IMPROVEMENT! :O

Near the end, maybe just make it 2 frames when he goes down, it looks too weak. I think you just need to work on your spacing, a bit more and you will be at around Pf0's + level. xD
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Feb 3, 2009 1:15 PM #351324
Contiune it please
and your logo is cool
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Feb 3, 2009 2:44 PM #351343
its nice but i noticed some flaws..


the head and the arms are resizing.. you should fix that other than that it's great.. love the effects
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