Endeavour on NG (Mesmay)

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Feb 19, 2009 10:41 PM #360438
"I advise you watch this animation without any former expectations. After all, its more what you, as the audience, think rather than what I wish you to think.

Hopefully you like it still.

I wanna some people I guess, who I missed out in the credits:
-M1CKY (he did the end song which played during the credits)
-tomocles (he told me where to improve when I showed him this for the first time. I think it helped a lot to encourage to to finish)
-anyone I've missed

Thats about it. If you have any questions, feel free to ask (as long as they dont question the meaning of the anim) and please write a review- I might not reply to eery one but I DO read them and if they contain any crit I DO take it on board because I want to improve.

Relatively short commentary to match a very short animation.

Oh, and by the way- watch out for a site called T&M which might pop up somewhere soon- it'll have this along with a lot of my other work on it and if you like my stuff Id watch out for it.

Thanks for reading this."



copied from NG

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/483982

So this was basically a little side project I almost gave up on a while back. (the epic stuff is still in the works)
Luckily mr javarush was there to inspire me :s

But yeah, I like it, but its not up to me, its up to you :D
Take a peek and gimme a review if you have the time.

Thanks.

Nervous :S
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Feb 19, 2009 10:49 PM #360446
wow awesome you're turning into a great animtor! very creative, cute and well animated. not much more i can say, you made me emotionally attach and have empathy for the main character, which is a vital part of a piece like this. yoour creativeness is awesome, something i can never master :P so great job, well done, i 5'd it with no regret :D hope it gets a good score! actually hope it gets a GREAT score :D
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Feb 19, 2009 10:54 PM #360449
The soundtrack went really well with the tone of the animation. Animation wise, it was really good, but I was a tad confused about the storyline.
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Feb 19, 2009 11:32 PM #360470
I, without a doubt, love this.
Is this a tear? oh boy.
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Feb 19, 2009 11:44 PM #360481
that was fantastic very good song to go with it
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Feb 19, 2009 11:45 PM #360483
nice score too...over 3.5 :) nearly 3.6 now...im guessing it'll just go up from here
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Feb 19, 2009 11:53 PM #360490
5d! nice work mesmay i loved the Bg and stuff.. also i loved the story.

now its 3.66.. gudluck hope you get the daily top..

and glad to be of inspiration..

offtopic: as for me im gonna quit raizen for awhile and make some fullbody onehitwonder animations.. got disapointed a lot with raizen 2.
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Feb 19, 2009 11:57 PM #360496
wow thanks for the comments and reviews.
nice to know people liked it.

fitzy- the score is nice, yes, not what I hoped though :) it was higher for my last ani which apparently wasnt as good.

Im happy as long as it gets faved though, that means people were probably inspired.

javarush i doubt ill get daily top at this rate- i might still get an award though- i sure hope so.



<3
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Feb 20, 2009 12:30 AM #360516
hmmm seems to be climbing constantly. i looked through submissions with higher scores and looks like your headed for daily 4th or 3rd...there are 2 submissions with 4.2+ so i wouldnt be expecting 1st or 2nd :P

and your last anim was seeds wasnt it? i thought that was great :-/
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Feb 20, 2009 12:39 AM #360518
That was amazing.
Very well animated, music went well with the animation itself.
Awesome work, loved it.
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Feb 20, 2009 12:39 AM #360519
Too cute ;.;

5'd
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Feb 20, 2009 1:56 AM #360574
hell yeahs 4.04 :O awesome :D
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Feb 20, 2009 2:28 AM #360591
4.07 :)

I think its peaked now, though.
Hasnt gone up or down in a while.




Its strange though, really; this outscores Seeds yet will only get Daily 5th, whereas Seeds got 2nd.
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Feb 20, 2009 2:36 AM #360596
awesome job mesmay! I loved it. <3
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Feb 20, 2009 12:16 PM #360820
The clap at the end broke the mood for me, but yeah otherwise it was pretty well done.