"I advise you watch this animation without any former expectations. After all, its more what you, as the audience, think rather than what I wish you to think.
Hopefully you like it still.
I wanna some people I guess, who I missed out in the credits:
-M1CKY (he did the end song which played during the credits)
-tomocles (he told me where to improve when I showed him this for the first time. I think it helped a lot to encourage to to finish)
-anyone I've missed
Thats about it. If you have any questions, feel free to ask (as long as they dont question the meaning of the anim) and please write a review- I might not reply to eery one but I DO read them and if they contain any crit I DO take it on board because I want to improve.
Relatively short commentary to match a very short animation.
Oh, and by the way- watch out for a site called T&M which might pop up somewhere soon- it'll have this along with a lot of my other work on it and if you like my stuff Id watch out for it.
Thanks for reading this."
copied from NG
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/483982
So this was basically a little side project I almost gave up on a while back. (the epic stuff is still in the works)
Luckily mr javarush was there to inspire me :s
But yeah, I like it, but its not up to me, its up to you :D
Take a peek and gimme a review if you have the time.
Thanks.
Nervous :S
Endeavour on NG (Mesmay)
Started by: Mesmay | Replies: 32 | Views: 1,820
Feb 19, 2009 10:41 PM #360438
Feb 19, 2009 10:49 PM #360446
wow awesome you're turning into a great animtor! very creative, cute and well animated. not much more i can say, you made me emotionally attach and have empathy for the main character, which is a vital part of a piece like this. yoour creativeness is awesome, something i can never master :P so great job, well done, i 5'd it with no regret :D hope it gets a good score! actually hope it gets a GREAT score :D
Feb 19, 2009 10:54 PM #360449
The soundtrack went really well with the tone of the animation. Animation wise, it was really good, but I was a tad confused about the storyline.
Feb 19, 2009 11:32 PM #360470
I, without a doubt, love this.
Is this a tear? oh boy.
Is this a tear? oh boy.
Feb 19, 2009 11:44 PM #360481
that was fantastic very good song to go with it
Feb 19, 2009 11:45 PM #360483
nice score too...over 3.5 :) nearly 3.6 now...im guessing it'll just go up from here
Feb 19, 2009 11:53 PM #360490
5d! nice work mesmay i loved the Bg and stuff.. also i loved the story.
now its 3.66.. gudluck hope you get the daily top..
and glad to be of inspiration..
offtopic: as for me im gonna quit raizen for awhile and make some fullbody onehitwonder animations.. got disapointed a lot with raizen 2.
now its 3.66.. gudluck hope you get the daily top..
and glad to be of inspiration..
offtopic: as for me im gonna quit raizen for awhile and make some fullbody onehitwonder animations.. got disapointed a lot with raizen 2.
Feb 19, 2009 11:57 PM #360496
wow thanks for the comments and reviews.
nice to know people liked it.
fitzy- the score is nice, yes, not what I hoped though :) it was higher for my last ani which apparently wasnt as good.
Im happy as long as it gets faved though, that means people were probably inspired.
javarush i doubt ill get daily top at this rate- i might still get an award though- i sure hope so.
<3
nice to know people liked it.
fitzy- the score is nice, yes, not what I hoped though :) it was higher for my last ani which apparently wasnt as good.
Im happy as long as it gets faved though, that means people were probably inspired.
javarush i doubt ill get daily top at this rate- i might still get an award though- i sure hope so.
<3
Feb 20, 2009 12:30 AM #360516
hmmm seems to be climbing constantly. i looked through submissions with higher scores and looks like your headed for daily 4th or 3rd...there are 2 submissions with 4.2+ so i wouldnt be expecting 1st or 2nd :P
and your last anim was seeds wasnt it? i thought that was great :-/
and your last anim was seeds wasnt it? i thought that was great :-/
Feb 20, 2009 12:39 AM #360518
That was amazing.
Very well animated, music went well with the animation itself.
Awesome work, loved it.
Very well animated, music went well with the animation itself.
Awesome work, loved it.
Feb 20, 2009 12:39 AM #360519
Too cute ;.;
5'd
5'd
Feb 20, 2009 1:56 AM #360574
hell yeahs 4.04 :O awesome :D
Feb 20, 2009 2:28 AM #360591
4.07 :)
I think its peaked now, though.
Hasnt gone up or down in a while.
Its strange though, really; this outscores Seeds yet will only get Daily 5th, whereas Seeds got 2nd.
I think its peaked now, though.
Hasnt gone up or down in a while.
Its strange though, really; this outscores Seeds yet will only get Daily 5th, whereas Seeds got 2nd.
Feb 20, 2009 2:36 AM #360596
awesome job mesmay! I loved it. <3
Feb 20, 2009 12:16 PM #360820
The clap at the end broke the mood for me, but yeah otherwise it was pretty well done.