Some new shtuff

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Mar 3, 2009 3:37 AM #367349
this is going to be a 10 person killing spree.
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shading test
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kickish thing
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punch
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reaction test
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Mar 3, 2009 5:07 AM #367416
they are pretty good but the kick in the third one needs to have more power i had to watch it 3 times before i even saw the kick
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Mar 3, 2009 7:47 AM #367452
I like the killing spree so far, smooth and everything.

Im not sure about the shading, the black lines make it a little awkward looking imo.

I agree with wrestle on the kick.

The force on the punch is good, along with the aftermath, the stiff legs make it awkward though.

And finally, the reaction is good, the back seemed to stiff for the first second, threw me off.

Goodjob overall, sorry my CC sucks, I haven't done a pivot in 2 years, let alone give good CC :P.
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Mar 3, 2009 7:48 AM #367453
Dude, someone doesn't die when you hit him :|
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Mar 3, 2009 12:41 PM #367504
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Dude, someone doesn't die when you hit him :|


the guy got rabies when he got hit, theres just not enough detail to show it.:Happy:
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Mar 3, 2009 3:11 PM #367535
:| That's mean, why is he hitting someone with rabies?
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Mar 3, 2009 3:17 PM #367538
Ok dude you are a great pivot animator. Now move on to flash. Honestly I think you could be a great flasher. You have basically got this down.
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Mar 3, 2009 3:33 PM #367545
I agree with everyone except noobs, i'm tired of writing all the things that you're a great pivot animator etc.
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Mar 3, 2009 5:06 PM #367577
It's called trailing, by the way - not shading.
Only thing i can criticize is the blood, obviously you don't do it rarely but work on it.
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Mar 3, 2009 5:09 PM #367580
BTW, these anims are awesome.

Maybe the rabies guy bit the other guy and the other guy got aggressive and attacked him!?
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Mar 3, 2009 9:14 PM #367763
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Ok dude you are a great pivot animator. Now move on to flash. Honestly I think you could be a great flasher. You have basically got this down.


I do want to get flash but if i do, itll be real cartoons with voices and stuff like eddsworld (on youtube). Maybe even some games if i can figure out how.