Work on general movements; they're stiff.
Some parts were pretty smooth though.
Dunno why you blurred that guy's arm so much in the beginning.
Particles are terrible and lack proper form and easing.
Keep practicing.
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Luxi: It ain't my style because I don't use line, only this time as I was bored.