Hello!
This is my first serious animation in Flash 8. Can you tell me what do you think about it? This is the beta version.
http://www.truploader.com/view/419564
Sorry, I can't giving URL's yet and my English isn't very good. I'm from Poland.

Put the full link but put a space in "http" somewhere

Huh... I edit it and it's full URL o_0

When it first started it was okay, than everything basically fell apart.
The beam, the teleportation thing, and definitely the sounds.
try to make more frames, and ease it a little.

Besides all of that, your one of a few noobs who could actually use the edit button.
congratulation.

Quote from FoShizzle

When it first started it was okay, than everything basically fell apart.
The beam, the teleportation thing, and definitely the sounds.
try to make more frames, and ease it a little.

Besides all of that, your one of a few noobs who could actually use the edit button.
congratulation.

I was thinking same thing. And also looks like his been watching to much shock. becuase it looked like he tried to copy the effects ( badly )
And the sounds were TERRIBLE.

Ok, I try to do more frames and I ease it. Where can I get a good sound packs (I use XiaoXiao and DBZ pack...)? And one more thing. How can I do better beams?

sound packs from http://www.stonesbucket.com/downloads.php

learn to do particle effects.. to make your beams better...

good for a one of first

Thanks, your C&C really helped me. I have one more question. How much better than mine was first animations made by (now) profesional animators?

truploader.com/view/801589
Some test (alpha version :P). It's my first time with vcam. It will be longer. Anyway C&C please.
BTW. Sorry for my double post ^^'

I like the "flying" punch thing, but hard to tell how good it is since there is little animation.
The reaction of the guy getting hit was pretty good to.
And foshizzle already explained everything on the first one.

good for first, i would be starting full on c and c but i cant find where to get macromedia flash 8

Quote from Terc

good for first, i would be starting full on c and c but i cant find where to get macromedia flash 8

Lol I love how people are trying to steal Big names. I.E. Terc-Terkoiz. I mean seriously Did you think you were cool trying something dumb like that. And one more thing TERC... flash is like $300 or more.


Ok here is a pro tip. Especially since this is one of your first anims. Don't worry about making it look good or adding super nice effects. Work on movement and easing first. I.E. don't mess with any of the filters just yet. BLUR!! lol but seriously just do simple combo's what I did is I did the exact same combo over and over and over till I got it right. So i suggest doing that it really helps. do it once. post it, get C&C and make another one in the same anim. repost. ect. ect. ect.

:D sorry for writing such a long post. I see potentiel in you. Keep it up.

The next one was pretty good, but needed some basic stuff like more easing, less stiffness, more fluidness :D