A few witty animes.

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javarush214
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Mar 10, 2009 7:15 AM #371583

over did the blur there james, and even if you blurred it i saw that the guy's arm jerked twice, when he was about to bump his head to the floor. also the set of blood that hit the floor in the first anim was bad and stopped in the air in the middle of the moment it falls to the ground.

2nd anim.. the fart particles it was ugly once again, and its getting really old. also you over did the blur again.. but the run was good

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Mar 10, 2009 3:42 PM #371655

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over did the blur there james, and even if you blurred it i saw that the guy's arm jerked twice, when he was about to bump his head to the floor. also the set of blood that hit the floor in the first anim was bad and stopped in the air in the middle of the moment it falls to the ground.

That's called momentum/gravity. I slacked off on the blood, actually that whole short animation is slacked off. I didn't really try as I was bored but you're right about the blood it was bad. I know he jerked, I wanted to smooth it out but didn't bother.

2nd anim.. the fart particles it was ugly once again, and its getting really old. also you over did the blur again.. but the run was good

Okay I'll stop with that farting joke, lol. Yeah I took my time on the run.

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Mar 10, 2009 3:51 PM #371658

I wouldn't say the blur was overused, just it was used when it wasn't needed to be used. The blood needed easing, onion-skin-zoom-in type easing. And I can't see how "Think before doing an action" compensates with the guy when he slips. The anims were good though. Keep practicing...

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Mar 10, 2009 3:58 PM #371664

You mean more easing? As it already has easing, I always use easing, it just needs more easing.

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Mar 10, 2009 4:01 PM #371665

The blood looks like it was roughly redrawn without onion skin at some parts.

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Mar 10, 2009 5:13 PM #371683

it was ok.... I didn't find the first one too witty though....

I liked the blur effect on the blood though.. (on the second one)

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Mar 15, 2009 10:56 PM #375017

Yeah, the blur wasnt needed there. And i dont think the overall set of animaitons was "witty". Try thinking through the concept a little more. :P And it all needs a little more easing.