Hey all, long time no see.
http://filebox.me/view/717650
Enjoy.
Long time no see guys
Started by: Lixu | Replies: 34 | Views: 1,882
Mar 26, 2009 1:52 PM #381148
Mar 26, 2009 2:00 PM #381149
You should've made another frame for every impact, it looks way to fast. Pretty good, though.
Mar 26, 2009 2:01 PM #381150
I like to animate with this much recoil. Thanks.
Mar 26, 2009 2:03 PM #381152
Smooth, nice moves, felt like there was a little resizing somewhere, but I like it. Blood's good too. :]
Mar 26, 2009 2:11 PM #381156
Actually I think the resizing fits perfect but thanks for the compliment.
Mar 26, 2009 4:17 PM #381188
Jesus Christ, just take the ****ing criticisms.
Anyway, the whole animation is pretty much stiff, the movements are not spaced out enough and they seem rushed, except you were going for the whole exaggerated fight scene.
Anyway, the whole animation is pretty much stiff, the movements are not spaced out enough and they seem rushed, except you were going for the whole exaggerated fight scene.
Mar 26, 2009 4:59 PM #381204
I am taking the critics, faggot.
Mar 26, 2009 5:02 PM #381205
The moves are very stone like, but of course you learned it from him. It was indeed also very stiff at parts, and the physics in my opinion were slightly off at the sword part. I also don't like the way the blood was drawn. It was to.. clean. A tip might be to make some blood spatter dots (small) around em, or close to them but still not so close. [Which you have done. But I found the main blood drawing to cleanish, like it should be more spread. Idk]
I also don't like the movements of the blue guys arms at the sword part. It was to spazz-ish/Choppy? (Still don't know the full meaning of that word/googles) and fast.
I also don't like the movements of the blue guys arms at the sword part. It was to spazz-ish/Choppy? (Still don't know the full meaning of that word/googles) and fast.
Mar 26, 2009 5:08 PM #381208
"Actually I think the resizing fits perfect".
That isn't taking criticism.
That isn't taking criticism.
Mar 26, 2009 5:27 PM #381209
its boring and stiff
Mar 26, 2009 5:33 PM #381210
meh. It was ok, you obviously need to improve in some areas, but other than those mentioned in the posts before ... it was quite good.
KEEP IT UP!
KEEP IT UP!
Mar 26, 2009 5:46 PM #381216
Pretty stiff, and on the fourth punch, it didn't seem like it actually hit the guy.
Overall, it was alright :D
Overall, it was alright :D
Mar 26, 2009 7:11 PM #381257
Quote from zawmbee"Actually I think the resizing fits perfect".
That isn't taking criticism.
Yeah if I opinion is thinking that the resizing fits just fine, how is that bad?
Quote from KDmeh. It was ok, you obviously need to improve in some areas, but other than those mentioned in the posts before ... it was quite good.
KEEP IT UP!
What areas?
Quote from allyman8Pretty stiff, and on the fourth punch, it didn't seem like it actually hit the guy.
Overall, it was alright :D
Hmmm...Any tips how to fix that? :]
Mar 26, 2009 7:56 PM #381301
Quote from Lixu
What areas?
In the areas everyone in this thread has mentioned, and obviously the ones you have learnt with stone..
your not perfect just yet...
Mar 26, 2009 8:06 PM #381319
i personally liked the blood, but a little splatter would be pretty good. ive seen much better anims from you, this isn't one of your best. the arms look like they kinda flailed a bit throughout.