http://filebox.me/view/532616

http://filebox.me/view/532616

http://filebox.me/view/532616

sorry forgot to remove the guide layer and that voicing at the start

That was pretty swell.

There honestly wasn't that much to comment on though.

It looked good but the running part with the rhino man took way too long.

The characters aren't drawn as smoothly as you used to draw them (the outlines I mean). The motion isn't that smooth either sometimes. This is epic though and much better than most people can do, :D good job.

I thought it was terrible.
I'd tell you why, but I don't want to at the moment. :/

sorry but i didn't really like it

it looked really nice, the running with the rhino looked a bit odd, something with his arms maybe...

I personally liked it. Sure the animation wasn't amazing, but it looked great.

Quote from javarush214

uhh ok tell me something that would help not some bunch of crap.

I find that offensive, I see my oppinion as a well thought out fact, not "A bunch of crap", therefor I am not going to give you my crit, which you do not deserve.
Good day jackass

Sunder forge, I completely agree with Java. Why the **** even comment if you just say its crap but are to lazy to even say WHY? And when he asks for crit. You are ego and brag about that your crit is good/not good enough for him......... (Sorry >_> I don't wanna create a fight between us.. But still)
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Damocles and you are the only ones that do that \:

I hate such comments .. "'It sucks.. Uh, to lazy to say why'' or ''Crapp..Don't wanna say why now'''

Anyways. It felt kinda slow/to dragged out at some scenes/moments. But I liked it overall. I surely thought it wasn't crap. Crap is that basically EVERYTHING is off/bad in my opinion. This might not be EPIC, but crap is a whole different thing.

Quote from Ssjbryando

Sunder forge, I completely agree with Java. Why the **** even comment if you just say its crap but are to lazy to even say WHY? And when he asks for crit. You are ego and brag about that your crit is good/not good enough for him......... (Sorry >_> I don't wanna create a fight between us.. But still)
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Damocles and you are the only ones that do that \:

I hate such comments .. "'It sucks.. Uh, to lazy to say why'' or ''Crapp..Don't wanna say why now'''

Anyways. It felt kinda slow/to dragged out at some scenes/moments. But I liked it overall. I surely thought it wasn't crap. Crap is that basically EVERYTHING is off/bad in my opinion. This might not be EPIC, but crap is a whole different thing.

thanks ssj.. ill just have to make it more fast paced if thats what you mean.. thanks for the HELPFUL crit..

the first anim with rhino guy when he runs in the beginning the arms were choppy work on that java and some parts were stiff

Quote from Ssjbryando

Sunder forge, I completely agree with Java. Why the **** even comment if you just say its crap but are to lazy to even say WHY? And when he asks for crit. You are ego and brag about that your crit is good/not good enough for him......... (Sorry >_> I don't wanna create a fight between us.. But still)
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Damocles and you are the only ones that do that \:

I hate such comments .. "'It sucks.. Uh, to lazy to say why'' or ''Crapp..Don't wanna say why now'''

Anyways. It felt kinda slow/to dragged out at some scenes/moments. But I liked it overall. I surely thought it wasn't crap. Crap is that basically EVERYTHING is off/bad in my opinion. This might not be EPIC, but crap is a whole different thing.

False. I will take the time to criticise it, unless everything sucks, then I just say it sucks. Sorry, but no animation is perfect, there is always room to improve. If someone said my animations suck, I would assume that means work on everything. It's all about putting things together. Sunder forge thinks it sucks, so I could already tell you what he's going to say, it's not like we come up with new names for new things or some shit. Easing, physics, smoothness, scenery, effects, etc. They are all things that can be worked on, so javarush should assume that Sunder Forge means work on everything. That's what I'd do =/

The anim was th suk!
ir r th tru!

Quote from Damocles

(Some shit)

The anim was th suk!
ir r th tru!

FUCK YEAH!
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Quote from Sunder Forge

FUCK YEAH!
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wow i see rainbows and colors of happiness and sunshine


Come on guys. You can't just say why you didn't like an animation. At least give some tips with some animating-related terminology, like smoothness, easing, etc.



anyway the animation was kinda gud but id dint like itt very much so im not gonna say anything like thatad horse munch