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Arithon

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Mar 28, 2009 7:20 PM #382466
Lately i was too busy too make some new animations, but now I have some free time, so I made that:
http://www.truploader.com/view/313009
Sorry for quality, I've went out off profession ^^''
C&C please?
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Mar 28, 2009 10:19 PM #382848
i thought it was great!
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Mar 28, 2009 10:22 PM #382854
it was really good.
i cant believe your sorry about the quality
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Mar 29, 2009 7:47 AM #383160
Seriously? o.0 Thank you guys!
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Mar 29, 2009 8:04 AM #383174
yeah its great .
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Mar 29, 2009 8:27 AM #383190
the gravity was really off in some parts.
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Mar 29, 2009 8:44 AM #383217
Well to point out everything,
I'd rate the animation 4/10, why ?
-easing, you have to think with easing, you cant just do some movement without easing, unless you want it to be slow mo, or awkward looking
-physics, it goes hand by hand with easing, even if you say "I want a cartoon looking fight" when he kicks the guy in the air, he shouldnt stop, the easing should be like this (I'm using the ball, because of the lucidity http://www.truploader.com/view/711
-blur, it doesnt seem so, but its true when I say that its really hard to use blur, personally I dont like it, people are overusing it, this is your case, just remove it and it will look much better, want to do a fast movement ? just use easing, easing does everything, want to do some blur effect anyways ? use this: http://www.truploader.com/view/714208

/watching your animation again

I think its everything for this animation, once you've learned the easing, you can do EVERYTHING.

And Im not being harsh or something, I just want to help you, because critics like

"i thought it was great!"

"it was really good.
i cant believe your sorry about the quality"

these critics wont help you to get better, because animation is about improvement =)
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Mar 29, 2009 8:52 AM #383232
Thank you very much Tawnik. Your advices are very helpfull. I'm going to improve my easing ^^ Thank you again.
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