Oh So Sharp

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Mar 30, 2009 7:35 AM #384192
http://i-sneeze-colors.deviantart.com/art/Oh-So-Sharp-117556297


Rate here please.
http://www.fluidanims.com/view.php?id=331


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Mar 30, 2009 8:18 AM #384202
Sweeeeeeeeeet dude, I loved the movements very cartoony with just the right amount of slop. Kinda reminded me of like the old cartoons, don't ask how.

Anywho when the blade entered his head it looked forced, like I can see a little skip where you should have added a frame and put a wee bit more moving about it. The fall looked kinda lame also, didn't fit the style imo. Maybe a bit more dramatic in the limbs, like more ragdolly like. But eh whateva, do what you want and have fun yo. And now to never return to the flash section of spp ever ever again. :D
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Mar 30, 2009 8:32 AM #384206
Well thanks man.

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Mar 30, 2009 3:41 PM #384275
Very well eased and very un-wobbly, also great blood

GOOD JOB!
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Mar 30, 2009 6:38 PM #384401
that was great!
good easing and stuff, good blade trail, and good movements. oh, and the blood was good too.
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Mar 30, 2009 7:24 PM #384453
Thanks !
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Mar 30, 2009 7:36 PM #384461
Sounds dont fit, but the animation is good, fluid and the easing is good, I'd prefer better movements next time =)
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Mar 30, 2009 7:57 PM #384481
That was AWESOME.

Really good.
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Mar 30, 2009 9:19 PM #384595
Thanks Tawnik and Shanto.
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Mar 30, 2009 9:20 PM #384597
Very nice and cartoony.
Smooth movements, with moderate complexity.
Easing was also good and moderate.

I especially love the sword trails. Nice job.
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Mar 30, 2009 9:25 PM #384599
Give the man a shield:

Blood looked rushed, and when zoomed in, it looked danmed rushed.
Danm man, if that sword was replaced by any weapon, it'd look the same...not sure if that is good or bad, but it means something. Liked the stick's movements, but I guess you gotta thank the zoomed out approach for that a bit. He moved like spaghetti.


NOW GIVE HIM A ****ING SHIELD!
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Mar 30, 2009 9:44 PM #384605
Lololol. I'll do some more sword shorts and try getting them right.

RATE HERE PLOX
http://www.fluidanims.com/view.php?id=331