old:
http://www.truploader.com/view/738984
http://www.truploader.com/view/831624
new:
http://www.truploader.com/view/986406 (test)
leave tips and coments. ty =)
some of my animations...
Started by: N T | Replies: 5 | Views: 515
Apr 6, 2009 12:11 PM #389771
Apr 6, 2009 12:30 PM #389786
The two old ones:
Top one-
Wasn't bad, just it looked like the blue guy had a boner. The effects (his teleporting) kinda sucked, work on that. Also work on your blood, Zoom in and use a smaller brush. Then shade it in a little with a darker shade of red.
Bottom one-
That walking was horrible. He looked like he skipped, flew 2 ft forward, then some how tripped on the rock from 5 ft away. Also blood work on get.
New one:
Add a little more easing towards the end, nice force though.
Top one-
Wasn't bad, just it looked like the blue guy had a boner. The effects (his teleporting) kinda sucked, work on that. Also work on your blood, Zoom in and use a smaller brush. Then shade it in a little with a darker shade of red.
Bottom one-
That walking was horrible. He looked like he skipped, flew 2 ft forward, then some how tripped on the rock from 5 ft away. Also blood work on get.
New one:
Add a little more easing towards the end, nice force though.
Apr 6, 2009 3:43 PM #389868
thx for the tips. i just learned how to add sound today so.. my sounds r a little off.
Apr 6, 2009 4:05 PM #389888
Are you serious?
Apr 6, 2009 5:20 PM #389949
Quote from Saha
Are you serious?
Obviously, when he drew the leg, it went up too far, thus creating a penis looking thing.
First and Last we're ok, the second one looked odd, and uneased.
Apr 6, 2009 6:19 PM #390014
i liked the third one, the running in the first was really off, and... Well, I can't really tell what was off in the second one. Maybe it was just the movements?
Keep going, though, you're definitely improving.
Keep going, though, you're definitely improving.