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Whoot! Sign Bird.

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Apr 13, 2009 1:11 AM #394889
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/491210

Pretty short, but it's the first flash animation I have ever finished. I'm pleased.
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Apr 13, 2009 1:12 AM #394891
Lol I liked it. It was also pretty funny.
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Apr 13, 2009 1:15 AM #394894
seems unfinished
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Apr 13, 2009 1:16 AM #394895
How so? Well the end AS is a bit messed up so the music doesn't stop, but other than that it's the most finished I had planned it to be.
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Apr 13, 2009 1:22 AM #394899
I agree, I was expecting him to get shot or like go look for eggs or see someone steal his eggs. Like more of what he explained.
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Apr 13, 2009 1:53 AM #394920
Well I might continue with the concept later and add more to it, but for this particular one it was just somewhat of a quick happy easter ecard type.
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Apr 13, 2009 3:20 AM #395012
lol.. funny. how long did it take you to animate it?
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Apr 13, 2009 5:44 AM #395102
Sawc, you back? Haven't seen you in a LONNG time.
<3 the name wigglyness thing.
The drawing was quite good. Not much to say about animation.
Really good for a first, try adding colour. :D
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Apr 13, 2009 12:26 PM #395282
Well its short, but looks ok.
Did you motion tween something or just fbf? Or both?
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Apr 13, 2009 1:02 PM #395304
The art just seemed a bit conceptual, thick lines are bad, use as much detail as you can, also a coloured or atleast shaded version would be more likeley to be a finished version other then this one.
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Apr 13, 2009 1:40 PM #395320
Cute, but it seemed unfinished as said. It wasn't the black and white necessarily - some of the lines just looked too sketchy.
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Apr 13, 2009 10:42 PM #395694
I'll have to work on my artistic abilities. And this was all fbf, I prefer it over tweening unless I only need basic movement.
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Apr 14, 2009 2:39 AM #395843
It was good, I liked it. But I didn't hear any music :( I heard the gunshot though. Oh well. Looked great to me.
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