http://www.truploader.com/view/366845

Unfinished, we thought it wasn't good. I am the black stick and he is the blue stick.

Enjoy and CC please. :D

All good. Not too original, maybe try something different (i.e. with weapons, or not fighting at all), but apart from that the animation was good.

Yah, we were just wanting to do some other old fight... :D

Good so far. I think you guys should have added a background instead of putting the main emphasis on the sticks. Like, zoomed out a bit with a BG.

Use double-framing, your animation is pretty cool but it needs to be slowed down a lil bit =)

I disagree with Tawnik, that flowed well and would not benefit from slow-down.

Yay, two of my probably favourite people!


Awesome!

Good rhythm, I enjoy it.

Looking forward to your finished work.

The blue stick was good, but the black stick had some really weird poses, and looked sloppily drawn.

Quote from Chosen

Yay, two of my probably favourite people!


Awesome!

<3 Thanks man. I'll try and make something longerrr...

Quote from doc

The blue stick was good, but the black stick had some really weird poses, and looked sloppily drawn.

That's 'cause blunt had a tablet, and I had to use my mouse the whole way through the animation.


Thanks everyone else for the comments. ^.^

You didn't put it together very nicely, they don't really joint well. Animation was decent, liked Bluntanim's more, you need to work on sloppiness and certain weird positions, looked like yours didn't move much. =3

How many frames did you do? Looks like BA did all of it ¬-¬

Errm, I animated the black stick, all bymyself...
I animated around 100 or so frames, the rest were still frames :P

Hawk, yeah, I see the positions were akwardd...My slopiness was a bit blamed on 'cause I was using mouse and not tablet. Some of it was also speed animated, which was what we were going for at the beginning.

That was good. I don't understand the disapearing and re-apearing though.
I know you did it as a cartoony and comical effect, but the first one was wierd. The 2nd was funny though when the guy looked around for him.

Nothing that I could see was negative other than the look around at the end, although funny it was too fast and lacked the illusion his head really turned.

You can get the full idea of some of the perspective/3D-like views of the sticks, and the movement was good, the fast movement is justified since it was a fight. The effects were also very good.