im a bigginer on flash so i wanted to see if this was good enough for this website , i want some tips aswell because i know its not that good , thanks
http://www.truploader.com/view/162328
thanks for watching
PS : I didnt post it on begginer because the thread was closed
My Run Test - Beginner
Started by: l300l30 | Replies: 7 | Views: 558
Apr 18, 2009 8:20 AM #399192
Apr 18, 2009 8:29 AM #399197
You should really make the stick bigger so you can see the leg movements better. No offense, but the rest was bad, but like you said, you're a beginner.
I have NO CLUE what he morphed into.
The physics were way off, he should not stop moving forward in mid-air while he is flipping.
Try to show him taking the impact when he lands, bend his knee's, hunker him down just a little.
Keep trying, you'll get it.
I have NO CLUE what he morphed into.
The physics were way off, he should not stop moving forward in mid-air while he is flipping.
Try to show him taking the impact when he lands, bend his knee's, hunker him down just a little.
Keep trying, you'll get it.
Apr 18, 2009 8:40 AM #399201
yea killdude i am only good at pivot lol XD
yea i don't know what he morphed into aswell i just turned him into a monster
yea i don't know what he morphed into aswell i just turned him into a monster
Apr 18, 2009 8:50 AM #399208
Well, I hope to see you more in the flash section. You seem to have potential.
Apr 18, 2009 9:58 AM #399338
i do? wow thanks! :D
Apr 18, 2009 10:24 AM #399432
it was ok for a beginner. it looked like he morphed into a tree. work on flips and walking and everything. and since you use pivot a lot, you probably don't have much experience drawing a stickfigure. work on that a little more too. oh.. and you didn't have to add the "PS" everyone on SPP nows that the flash thread is closed.
Apr 18, 2009 1:16 PM #399932
you should look at some tuts but keep practicing. it was okay for beginner.
Apr 19, 2009 2:34 PM #401043
Work on stick construction. His joints were so fat I can't really critiseze the movements, other than saying they weren't great.