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Apr 25, 2009 7:00 PM #405565
Fo'shizzle!

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GIMME C&C xD
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Apr 25, 2009 7:13 PM #405568
Low-med beg, although I don't really know that much about ranks.
All the movements were extremely stiff. There was no fluidity whatsoever.
Easing was terrible throughout the entire animation. It was not applied very well in any movements at all, even though I can see that you tried.
Movements were not smooth either, and the effects you tried to use with the previous frame faded did not help at all. You have no follow-through in any of your movements. You also did not move every single limb in some parts, particularly right before the figure jumps up.
The ragdoll technique you tried with the arms in the beginning was very badly done, because there was no easing and no afterwards floppiness.
The rock has bad easing, or maybe you wanted it to be like that?

Uh, keep practicing. Don't take my word for the rank though. Take my word for the criticism.
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Apr 25, 2009 7:15 PM #405571
High beginner because I've seen other animation from you, and they were better.
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Apr 25, 2009 7:17 PM #405572
okayz , Btw Zyles i acturly wanted u to rank tah animation , but ok.
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Apr 25, 2009 7:18 PM #405573
Quote from Omega
Low-med beg, although I don't really know that much about ranks.
All the movements were extremely stiff. There was no fluidity whatsoever.
Easing was terrible throughout the entire animation. It was not applied very well in any movements at all, even though I can see that you tried.
Movements were not smooth either, and the effects you tried to use with the previous frame faded did not help at all. You have no follow-through in any of your movements. You also did not move every single limb in some parts, particularly right before the figure jumps up.
The ragdoll technique you tried with the arms in the beginning was very badly done, because there was no easing and no afterwards floppiness.
The rock has bad easing, or maybe you wanted it to be like that?

Uh, keep practicing. Don't take my word for the rank though. Take my word for the criticism.


Now THAT'S good cc. You get a solid 9.5 out of 10 for that one, Omega. Keep up the good work.

As for the animation, I think it looked better than a lot of beginner stuff so I would put it around med rather than low. I can't offer any more cc than what Omega gave you.
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Apr 25, 2009 7:19 PM #405574
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Now THAT'S good cc. You get a solid 9.5 out of 10 for that one, Omega. Keep up the good work.

As for the animation, I think it looked better than a lot of beginner stuff so I would put it around med rather than low. I can't offer any more cc than what Omega gave you.


lol .
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Apr 25, 2009 7:21 PM #405575
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okayz , Btw Zyles i acturly wanted u to rank tah animation , but ok.


Med beginner then, everything Omega said.
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Apr 25, 2009 7:23 PM #405577
Lol Okay man xD
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Apr 25, 2009 9:53 PM #405700
You can do better. Generally, you need to add more fluidity, and by that I mean make the movements flow with no stopping and starting by adding more easing and making it less stiff. It was med beginner, so that's what I'm rating it, but you're high beginner because I've seen you do better.
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Apr 26, 2009 7:03 AM #406033
Med beginner, I guess.
Stiff, and easing has to be improved, IMO.


Good luck :D
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Apr 26, 2009 8:09 AM #406040
And now post your animations in the beginners section.
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May 2, 2009 8:51 PM #410589
Luilak hang je jas op.
Yeah, it was ok, just a very odd way to animate it. Looks lazy :p.
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May 10, 2009 12:02 PM #416028
I agree with Chosen. Still needs a tiny bit of easing. Great job, though.
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May 10, 2009 12:05 PM #416029
wow, i forgot this thread existed. it's pretty much dead
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May 10, 2009 12:07 PM #416032
And now..., it has been revived! for no particular reason
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