Testes

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alcaknight

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Apr 29, 2009 12:42 AM #408339
I mean ... tests.

http://www.truploader.com/view/791551

http://www.truploader.com/view/988816

C&C if you will.

I noticed at the end I messed up on his foot. It goes too quickly from one point. To the other.

Thanks!
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Apr 29, 2009 1:21 AM #408359
The walk needs more fluidity and more frames. Its choppy.

The "punch" looks like a jab. Try to bend back for anticipation and slowly thrust forward and execute the punch. Or, watch fighting clips from youtube.
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Apr 29, 2009 1:38 AM #408366
Nice fluid movements on the jabs.
But the leg movements were just a little off.
But I suppose making the feet turn around as well as the body is difficult.
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Apr 29, 2009 9:53 AM #408513
The walk was a bit fast.
For the punches, the other arm should raise up too. Good job on making the rest of the body move though, and decent force.
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Apr 29, 2009 11:19 AM #408531
Hey, thanks guys! Too bad I will not be able to animate during the summer....
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Apr 29, 2009 12:54 PM #408553
The walk needed more easing and as for the 'punch'... well it didn't seem like a punch at all to be honest :-/
Try doing what Saha said, and watching video clips is a great idea, it can really help if your not sure how to animate something or unsure of a pose ect.
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Apr 29, 2009 4:32 PM #408640
You are improving a lot.... keep practicing!
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May 1, 2009 8:22 PM #409812
Firstly,I wanna ROFLMAO to KD's sig


ROFLMAO

secondly the walk was too fast but still good if u well...it was slowed down
thirdlyyyy!!!!!!1...Kewl banana arms :3